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| "The Legend of the Catnip Spice" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lord Retro [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
An interesting story, but 2 things that kinda bugged me. 1) Maho. As wonderful and cute as she is, WAY TO YOUNG! 2) Mizuho is usually a suspicious sort, but she doesn't find it strange that he was securely handcuffed to the bed, that his clothing appeared to be removed AFTER being handcuffed. Also would there not be a little "evidence" of what took place on Kei and the sheets?
| Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do realize how very young Maho is, right? I really ought to berate you for that. Her involvement (as opposed to someone older like Hatsuho) is the only reason I cannot give this a solid ten. In other news... including the Jusenkyo guide was clever.
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