Title: hmm Reviewed By:anime RuLeS u all [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:44 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: i liked it but if u made it longer and a little bit more interesting it'd b a lot better. i think if u added more romance with mitsuru and mahiru it would make it a better story. but thats just a suggestion