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| "Darkening Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: InnChan On: May 17, 2012 21:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story, this one. Read it in one go, at 4 in the morning! Hope you get this review, 'cause it's been 7 years since you finished the story. | Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Megansmiles On: December 17, 2006 21:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My! That story kept me going, a couple of things I have to say.. The style of writing was interesting, but it would have been better if you organized it in paragraphs, the beginning of the chapters were kind of hard to find. Also, the chapters were so short! I was so sad, but the plot was well thought out. I could not keep myself from looking away. The Princess and the Tengu's relationship didn't fully blossom until later on in the story, I find people are very hasty with these things. I am really baffled as to why there are hardly any reveiws! Quiet odd.. Amazing Job!
| Reviewed By: BaltoLuver63 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah...this is trully a great 'Crescent Moon' fic. I'm loving your style - reminds me of my own in some ways. I loved the whole 'water fight' scene between Akira and Keiko (Oh, just so you know, they're my FAVORITE couple! And I only just finished reading all the Crescent Moon manga that's out there!) I think, by far, the funniest part of this whole chapter was when Keiko said "He's the angry one." in reference to Mitsuru and his unpredictably volitile nature! I couldn't help it; I laughed so hard I woke my parents up! (Quite a feat, considering taking into account the fact that they sleep a level below me...man am I loud!) I myself have been thinking of writing my own AkiraXKeiko fic - I'm a rather old hand when it comes to romance fics. Just check out my profile (using the same name, BaltoLuver63) on Fanfiction.net and you'll see what I mean. Whoops! sorry! Got into self-promotion again! I've really got to work on that! Akira: Yeah...haven't you been meaning to do that for a while? Uh...yeah. but enough about my problems! Back to the review! I love how you portray all the characters - you've gotten their personalities right on down the line. I can't wait to read the rest of what you've got so far! I hope everything will work out all right between Akira and Keiko... Akira: Me too...*whistles* Damn, she's FINE, MMMMM,MMMMM! (wags tail and howls at the moon). Keiko: *blushes furiously* Oh my...Akira, you're such a naughty little puppy...! Hey you two! No fluffyness on my account! Save it for the fic - as I'm sure there's more! Anywho, I'm gonna cut this off now, as I can't wait to finish this off! I'm sure looking forward to this! With sincerest greetings and the utmost respect, Your friend, admirerer and fellow author, BaltoLuver63
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