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| "Camp Winthrop" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Reviewed By: Monster Envy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome abosolutely awesome not my favorite of your stories but still awesome!
| Title: Monster Envy
Reviewed By: Monster Envy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 19:09 CST
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ho Shit!! I only just realised that Tayuyu is Tayuya...And i thought i t was an OC wow was i confused
| Title: great story!
Reviewed By: Mimi Hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely perfect so far! I can't wait for the next chapter, it's so funny, and wonderfully written! I love how Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is moving along, and pretty much everything from Diedra is hilarious at this point! You are doing a very good job, please keep updating this fic, it has such strong potential after only a few chapters. I can't wait for the next update ^_^
| Title: YAY!! *does REALLY happy dance*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 16, 2006 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See, I've been waiting for this update since NOVEMBER! *stares in shock* I'm just so glad you updated! YOU BETTER FEEL BAD SASUKE! Now go kiss Naruto and make it better ^_~ Haha, well I hope your next update comes sooner than this one did!
| Title: *whimper*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reading this... and I was getting excited.. and was still happy when I saw that there was only two chapters.. b/c you know, I can wait. And then *horror music... start... NOW* I saw that you haven't updated until august. *whimper* *puppy dog eyes* please update!! I'll give you my gravi manga and pic. collection!!!
| Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: September 10, 2005 15:17 CDT
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*growls* Why??? WHY??? WHY I ASK??? You h... haven't updated yet. *cries* please please please please PLEASE update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Mochi~ On: August 30, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEE!!
| Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 23, 2005 13:20 CDT
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>_< Please update!!! It's sooo funny! It reminds me of a movie I saw, can't remember what tho, with the food in the teacher's face just as they open the door. *nods* a classic.
| Title: Damn it...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 18, 2005 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw shit, I wrote that long ass review for nothing... Update soon anyway.
| Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 14, 2005 09:31 CDT
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>.< Update... please? *puppy eyes* I love your style of writing, and I like where the story's going so far. *nods*
| Title: Now what I really want to see...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 10, 2005 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, OK! From the very start, I've been wanting some Neji/Naruto action. I think a little Sasuke/Naruto would actually work really well in here, but not to the point where they start an actual relationship. Just a little romantic or whatever tension. Maybe some scary Orochimaru threats (but no angsty rape, etc. Please.) or Ibiki hitting on Kurenai. I thought I saw the beginings of some Asuma/Kurenai, but somehow I think Ibiki would be waay funny. Um, what else? I'm glad to see Tayuya in here, she really fits into the high school scene. Lesee... An akward love square with the Akatsuki? Hmm, not sure whether or not I want to see that. Itachi and Kankuro need to get together, but maybe Kisame will object? Dunno if it should be jealous objection or Kankuro-is-a-loser objection. You tell me if I'm making sense at all. Oh, and what is with Sasori's and Deidare's master/art appreciation thing? And what happens if the drug peddler finds out about Itachi's condition? (Damn, I'm writing a lot!) But, let's stop. I'm tired. The thing I want to see most, more than Neji and Naruto, more than a lovesick Ibiki all over Kurenai, more than ANY OTHER PAIRING is Sakura and Ino! Oh my God! What will the small, isolated world of Konohagakureton think when: the number one most capable brother pair (Itachi and Sasuke) and the richest, most popular young aristocrats (Sak, Ino) are all gay?! Haha, that is a LAUGH. I want to Sakura and Ino at it (with Ten-Ten, Hinata, Temari, and Tayuya as witnesses), s | Reviewed By: bookworm51485 On: August 10, 2005 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this new fic, I assume this is the SasuNaru fic you were talking about writing. I have to say I like your style of writing, you go into details about things but not too much detail like some people tend to do, your writing is very readable I think. And your grammer is good which is getting very rare. For pairings hmmm.....I dunno. I have a hard time seeing Sasuke with anybody else, maybe because in the series the one you see him with/responding to the most is Naruto. But I'd like to see Naruto paired up with somebody else. Maybe Itachi:D. I like ItaNaru pairings though they are hard to find when Naruto is a willing half. Anyways good job, update soon but don't forget about your other story cause it's so cool.
| Reviewed By: Itachi_Uchiha17(2 lazy to login) On: August 09, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT! Hoping and wishing you'll make it a SasuxGaara fic. They're just so cute together! -preppy squeal- Update all of your fics soon!
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