| "Cutting Ties" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Silver Lady Crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 03:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool. Finally that witch heard what she should had many years ago. I may not be a Gohan fan, but I always like when he has a backbone.
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Title: Lol
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute. I liked it. There were a couple mistakes though that I thought I might let you know about so you can fix them! And since freaking mm.org doesn't allow paragraphs, I'll use // to seperate it.//If he didn't allow himself to release soon, he knew he's (should it be he'd?) explode.// Even if I have to jump 10 stories to the ground from here, she will be getting a pice (should it be piece?) of my mind.//Good job though. What was the funniest line? you should write it down at the bottom.
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this! So funny and so overdue. It's about time Gohan told his mother to back off! Excellent job!
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!!!! *^o^* I love your story!!! *^_^* It's the best DBZ Fanfic that I've read so far!!!!! *^_^* (LOL) *^_~* GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!*^_~* JA-NE!!!!!!!!!!! *^_~*
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