| "Can a Devil Fall in Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: me On: August 16, 2005 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awsome fanfic! How about Tala? I don't think Bryan would do to well...
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Kiyomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Add more..cous the chapters are too short and they leave you hanging
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Reviewed By: D.S.K. On: August 15, 2005 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting so far, though I'd like to see longer chapters. being more descriptive on everything. Synonyms are very usefull aswell. I look forward to reading more, so please update A.S.A.P.
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