| "Can a Devil Fall in Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 13:20 CDT
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You go buddy!!
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Reviewed By: Olinca Uffeca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 09:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was great, please keep writing it.
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Reviewed By: mizaminer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:36 CDT
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write more plese!
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Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:07 CDT
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hi, i was detouched from the mediaminer for a long time, and you still didnt update??? *puppy dog eyes* you said you never abondoned your readers
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Reviewed By: reader22 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to read more. please update soon!!!
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Title: waiting
Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey buddy, r u OK? it's preety good time since u have updated. why taking so much time? it is a good atory and iam eagerly waiting for you update... u don't have any thought of abandon this story, right?
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Title: can a devil fall in love?
Reviewed By: L3V@N@ On: October 03, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo its me agin...did i say tala should get pregnent i ment to say bryan to get pregnent coz tala hot and it dosent,well...tala dosent look or sound like the type to have a baby,and tala sounds like the dominant type of guy out of him and bryan...and does tyson start to love kai?do they have something special?and what about ray and max waht happenes with them?and yeh... >.<
and can you make the chapterz just a bit longer...please and thank you...^-^ >.< laterz...
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Title: can a deail fall in love?
Reviewed By: L3V@N@ On: October 03, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo!!!wuzz up? great story,i love it...>.<
and i cant wait 4 tha next chapter to come.im going to injoy reading the next chapter... and i vote that tala shuold have a baby(but how does he have tha baby and who does he have the baby with???)anyway great story (i loved it)>.<
laterz:l3v@n@ p.s=im going to read more fanfiction stories on beyblade and then initial d and i might be able to sqweez NARUTO in there. laterz >.
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Title: witing
Reviewed By: pinak On: September 19, 2005 11:31 CDT
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hey HRU? waiting is not fun u know. and your story is bumping my head too much that i cant sleep. can u update quick if it is possible?
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Reviewed By: CANDY-CANDY On: September 17, 2005 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey..UPDATE SOON...GUMMY-BEAR
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: September 15, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Bryan to get pregnant! Since I see Tala as seme! As for Hiro being in HellFire, pls have him and Tyson meet up asap! Same with Max and Ty meeting up! But, better wait until Nekojin mating season is over! And someone better tell Tyson and Max that Rei and Kai won't be taking another people as mates...*points to chapter 3*
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: M.Kou On: September 14, 2005 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far... but i honestly think that bryan should get pregnant and not tala. it seems a little wierd for tala toget pregnant as he seems to be more of the dominant type to me compared to bryan.
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Reviewed By: CANDY-CANDY On: September 12, 2005 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Goin...Can't Wait For Next Chappie..SO UPDATE
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Reviewed By: _Dream_ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 18:30 CDT
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Very interesting fic. I hope you update soon & if it weren't to much trouble could you make the chapters longer? PLS!!! :) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: CANDY-CANDY On: August 31, 2005 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Think...TALA..Should Get Pregnent........I Must Say Nice Nice Fic.....SO Update Soon
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