| "Love between differences" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 00:17 CST
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You wrote such a lovy dovy fic its so cute.....dont take this as a flame but the plot is kinda scattered......that isn't realy a bad thing its just different, Its like alot of good things are happening but all the bad things that happen arn't conected in any way, but other then that this is a cute fic.........It makes me wander why after 22 chapter you would suddenly stop writing it I mean the kits didn't get born and the ternament haddent started yet and Naraku is still alive, I wander what he's doing when he's not attacking them, and I wander how he kept getting in to the Yoko and Kitsu's bed room, that is another question how come her name change after the first couple of chapter I think I misted it........o-well, I dought that I will be able to get my questions answered cause you haven't writen on this fic for almost two years.....*tear drop*....Its a pitty realy just because I could fallow the bad guys motives I still realy enjoyed reading your fic I mean I didn't stop reading it untill I finished I took me all day *sigh* I'm such a slow reader, personaly I think you should be able to do what ever you want with your fic's Flameing is stuped because the purpose of a fan fic is to give people a chance to see the crazy stories that take place in the minds of all the anime lover, where they worp the stories in to different but fun stories, I can only hope that you can continue this fic I know that only one review would not start someone writing again but I want you to know that you have the potental to be a great writer, and I beleave it is my duddy as a reader of this fic to inform you...XD.........so ya it was fun while it lasted...........................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: What? SHUT UP! On: November 08, 2006 18:16 CST
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*Smacks you on the back of the head.* Don't put yourself in the story! *Smacks again.* Consider this a flame. *Smacks again.* Cant even read past chapter one without getting pissed off *Smacks again.*
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Reviewed By: Vindette On: January 20, 2006 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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Tch....I hate when people put them selves in teh story, it ruins it all.
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 16:16 CST
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I love all the LOOOOOOOVE! heh, sorry. I get a little hyper when I'm reading fanfiction for a long time. The lemons were fairly good, but once again, work on that grammar. I know that crap is like the most boring part of writing, but it's hard for readers (Okay, mostly me -_-...) to understand the emotions of the characters if you don't put it the right punctuation and all that other good stuff. (I just contradicted myself didn't I?)I'm sorry if I wasn't as positive about this story than with your other one, but OCs don't generally appeal to me as much. OVERALL, it was a really good read and I hope you update soon. ~Ali Ps- It suddenly occured to me that I could beta for you if you want... -_-... see how sloooow I can be? You have my email if your interested.
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Reviewed By: Thats right baby,i'm going crazy,I need to be your lady,cuz you and me, yes we can make it,just ride with me roll with me, I'm in love with you Sesshy!!!! On: October 31, 2005 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST UPDATE FOR ME GRAMS!!!!I can't wait till I kill that wench/bitch, hahahahahahahaahhaha!!!!!!!!Well anyway, great chap, can't wait till the next one!!!
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Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm intersting... is there somthing tht i don't no. tht i missed maybe
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Reviewed By: I'm trying to forget that I'm addicted to Sess, I want him and I need him, and I addicted to Sess, now it's over, can't believe what you said, and I never want to read that chapter again, baka hentai! On: September 20, 2005 19:53 CDT
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I got six words for your ass:Where da hell is my chapter?!?!?!?!?! And ewwwwww!!!!!Did you really need to write that?!OMG, AND all the funny parts are gone aren't they?Hurry and update please ja ne!^_~
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Bakagirl On: September 07, 2005 13:53 CDT
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Please update and good lemons ja ne
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Title: Update soon
Reviewed By: Foxygirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 21:25 CDT
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I love this fic and Kitsu is pregnant that is cool just think Yoko a daddy
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Sessysmate5645 On: September 03, 2005 18:55 CDT
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please update I like I really like
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Kuramasgirl544764 On: August 26, 2005 02:19 CDT
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Please update
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Foxygirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 02:14 CDT
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I love the way you revised it please update.
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Title: idiot!!!!
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 20:10 CDT
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How you going to have that one scene from that other story in this story???And why didn't I get a bigger part like last time.I liked it when you posted this story before and alot of other people did too!So do us all a favor and change it back.That's why no one is replying,change it back Latina change it back!!!Oh and I got your little email!You better tell me now,and you know exactlly what I'm talking about!
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