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| "The Way of Things" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Congrats
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliantly written. Did you use a thesaurus for some of those words or was it simply your ingenius mind? Probably the latter. Anyway I loved the fic it interpreted the characters to perfection and it moved fluently. Absolutely loved it.* Personal Note: Sasuke in the bottom position was my favorite part;)*
| Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! SMEX! Thank you Sakura for walking away! No doubt to meet her lover Gaara...Or so I wish... Haha I love how you made them fighting in the beginning and that inevitably turned into smex...LOTS OF IT. Muah. :D
| Reviewed By: VickiLe On: August 10, 2005 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Sasuke thought it felt rather like swallowing live oysters." That is true you know. I like how you decribe everything realistically. It isn't picture perfect, because the world isn't. I like how you've incorporated the seals into your story. I was left just breathless, it isn't too dramatic and moves slowly, doesn't cut around everywhere. And most importantly it actually makes sense, you know how you sometimes get those stories which are hard to piece together? Everything is just a little out of place, too perfect? Anyway, I'll just end with: This is an amazing fic and you've got an original interesting writing style. Type On!
| Title: MEMO
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 10, 2005 02:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Stupefying" refers to the fact that no one reviewed, not the fic. Just, so I don't sound like I was paid to write this... Haha, but like I said, this matched really well with the canon. (Or, what I've read of it anyway.)
| Title: Stupefying
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 10, 2005 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was really... WOW. Perfect, this is exactly what a plausible relationship between these two would look like. (Only, the Sakura factor got minus-ed out somewhere. *looks for the missing factor* Ah, what the hell. We don't really want her around for this.) It's a little strange that they caught onto gay sex so quick, but I don't care because the development was so true to form. I can't beleive no one reviewed this... You did a good job. =)
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