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| "Loving Him" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: KATIIIIIIIIIEEEEEE!
Reviewed By: katyexmachina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, bestie, that was great. Seriously, I love your writing style. I'm a big Kagura/Sesshoumaru believer myself, and I have to say, even though it made me sad, your ficlet here definitely hits the nail on the head. This is exactly how I could imagine such a confrontation going. Ahh, poor Kagura! Lurrrve, Katy
| Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 01:35 CST
Comment/Review:
*bursts into explosive applause* It's rare that someone catches Sesshoumaru IC, but you nailed him perfectly. *APPLAUSE and confetti and chocolate and Sesshoumaru's stolen fluffy*
| Reviewed By: Manderz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is beautiful. I love your way of writing, you express emotion very well. You portrayed Sesshoumaru accurately, that would've been his obvious and painful reaction. Poor Kagura, I love her character. She and Sesshoumaru should have had a chance... =[ Keep it up! -Manderz
| Reviewed By: Kagura-ness aka mrssesshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh so sad, it makes Kagura seem so downright weak. AND SHE ISN'T ARRRR! But besides that I liked it. Reviewed and Bookmarked! Kagura-ness
| Title: FFARG review
Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 23:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for submitting this to FFRG, Neko! This was a fine piece you submitted. I literally felt Kagura's emotions with each paragraph. I was impressed. The only thing I saw wrong, in my opinion, was the parentheses. They seem unnecessary, but that's just me. Otherwise, superb job! Thanks for submitting the FFRG once again!
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: MissMusicality [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 12:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent job! I love reading about Kagura. She is such a minor character, and yet she contains a truly deep intellect, passion, and longing that she sparks the interest of the reader. You have done an excellent job of portraying her. Good job in capturing her sarcasm (my favorite of her traits) and also for making it realistic. (Or, as realistic as fiction can be.) Sesshoumaru didn't sweep her away, and he reacted exactly how one would expect him to react, at least at first. Well done. As far as improvements... I couldn't spot any that would stand out. You have done a great job with editing. No grammar or punctuation errors that I can see, and it didn't bore me, like some narratives tend to. Smooth transition of thoughts, and excellent diction. I hate not leaving any comments of improvement, but I'm having a sorely difficult time thinking of one. Excellent job, and thank you for entering this to FFARG. Keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Neko, you have an amazing sense of wording that makes my jaw drop. You can form the most fluent and beautiful sentences I've ever read. I really like this one-shot. Sometimes I get tired of citrus-y O.S, but this is really good!
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