| "Channel Surfing" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
You should do another chapter for it! lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was good, poor maromi though, but i guess its better then to have him watch... But one thing thats bugging me, isn't Lil Slugger a grade schooler, but then again, i guess nobody really knows what he is...lol
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: Kaori_is_Fading [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems like it could indeed happen, what, with Slugger being created to make Tsukigo feel more at ease with herself.
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Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 00:06 CST
Comment/Review:
wOW THAT WAS I DON'T KNOW. DID LIL SLUGGER ACTUALLY CARE ABOUT HER? IT SEEMED LIKE IT
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Reviewed By: Stranger On: August 24, 2005 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Its nice to see some PA fanfics around here. Keep up the good work!
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