| "DoG" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2002 13:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
In the beggining of July I reviewed this, and you emailed me back saying you'd update. Where's the update??? X( |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE DAMMIT!! X( This fanfic is very cute!! But doing it on the kitchen floor when your kids are in the other room isn't that smart....what if they walk in?? Trunks has suffered enough, he always walks in on them. Have u seen doujinshis of them?? ahem...anyways...You said you'd get the next chapter out ASAP!! It's been over a month!! CONTINUE!! this fanfic is good!! X( If you continue I'll even draw fanart for u if you want...but I suck @ drawing...but oh well!! CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2002 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like this one and keep them coming. You can if you want to make a lemon |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is Vegeta going to do with a DoG? I gotta know I just gotta. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2002 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute! I already feel sorry for Vegeta (having two daughters instead of one). The guy just can't seem to get a break can he? Anyway I hope you post the next chapter soon. |
