| "Through the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Write more when you can. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2002 23:50 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it, its got drama already, hehehe i love how youve already protrayed how much Vegeta does not like Bulma, thats a hard thing to do, well for me it is, every time i try to write him as a mean idiot it turns out that he is well i dont know you get the idea that im not good at writing fics. keep it up i wanna read more :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 06, 2002 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start (Vegeta can be such an @$$hole at times). Next chapter please. |
