| "The Pact" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
so far this fic is great- a little short- but you have more important things to worry about and anything is better than nothing- I hope to see more of this fic!
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was sooooo great! I hope you update soon! Totally awesome! And I think you should do a little bit with Envy as a woman. I totally loved the last scene, where Ed-kun was describing that stuff to Mustang. That was so funny! Again, update soon! I'll be waiting, and this story's going on my favorite's list!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story Is Great.I'm Soory About Your Mom Hope She Feel Better Soon^_^*
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Reviewed By: yugis_girl98 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is really good....i need to know what happens next.....please hurry and update as soon as you can.....10/10 as always.....keep up the good work.....i also hope that your mother gets better and gets released from the hospital soon....
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Reviewed By: catherine On: September 07, 2005 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god, this is... holy crap! you must continue, and i want smex. XD
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: September 06, 2005 09:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so well written. I'm really enjoying it. The characters are so dead on target - wonderfully done so far. I'll look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: To lazy to log in On: August 28, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man, you got it all wrong. I think that Greed is the guy humonclue-thingy, Envy is that girl that can change shapes, or is that lust? Anyway, YOU SUCK. Sorry, just my jackass of a muse, Inuelric. Inuelric is a combination of my two favortie charecters, InuYasha and Edward. i don't write stories about them because i cant do them justice. Godd luck. AND DON"T QUIT YOUR DAY JOB. sit doggy. OWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 22:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Innteeerressssting... I'm looking forward to where the story goes...
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