"Strangly In Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 18:30 CDT Comment/Review: wow I really like your fanfic..it looks like u haven't updated in a while.. *pouts* please do so? *smiles*
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: August 31, 2005 17:08 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That peeping Tom!!! I wonder how he'll be punished?... Update soon!
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Title: update!!! Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 21:18 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: YoukaiInuSlave On: August 16, 2005 01:21 CDT Comment/Review: That review was right. They don't have bathrooms or sinks or kitchens. Kaede has a one-room hut. Only rich people would have mirrors so you are right that Kagome would have to get a mirror out of her backpack. But there was no kitchen. She would have to go to the river or maybe they have a bucket with water in there but they don't have a kitchen, only one big room with a fire that they do everything in.
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 13, 2005 16:40 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I see the changes and they are a great improvement. I am really enjoying your story keep up the good work. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Sahara Universe On: August 13, 2005 12:31 CDT Comment/Review: your story is messing up when I click next chapter it takes me to the very first screen where you choose which anime you want to read. please fix.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 21:00 CDT Comment/Review: Hehehehe. Explaining the boyfriend concept is always fun. Well, as long as Kagome has cute puppy ears...
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Reviewed By: BK On: August 12, 2005 14:57 CDT Comment/Review: Your precious reviewer was correct about them having indoor plumbing but it is your story and you are intitled to write it any way you want. Also, they did have mirrors, if you remember Kanna always carried one. It was a little odd with the plumbing in the hut but I didn't really ruin the story for me, in fact I would like to know what happens next. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: InuKagFan63 On: August 12, 2005 07:30 CDT Comment/Review: Ummm...you do know that they didn't have any bathrooms or running water back then, right? There's no way Kaede would have a mirror either or a sink to hang it over. Mistakes about stuff like that kinda ruins the story.
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