| "Summer In Blue Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Chevyluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
GLOOORRRRYYYYYOOOOOUUUUSSSS!!!!! t'was truly great... in a massively perverted kind of way...
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Reviewed By: Aron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 10:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORREEEE Must have more chapters....I want a SEQUAL!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really nice story. I just love the Jim and Aisha fics, there ment to be. I think you could make this into an extended story it wouldbe very interesting, I know I'd read it.
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Reviewed By: Meowch! On: October 04, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! I loved it! Jim and Aisha are my favorite couple! but blue heaven is an astroid space staion in a vacuum so it most likely wouldn't have weather or seasons and if it did they probably wouldn't be very extream. Heifon would likely have seasons and Sentinel looks like a desert planet so i imagine it gets very hot in the summer. It was also sometimes dificult to tell who was talking so I would use script format.
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Title: Niiiiiiiiiccccceeee!
Reviewed By: Tury: Master of Mediocrity On: September 22, 2005 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great disciptions, seriously! Perfect ballance between action and fact-giving. And who dosen't love a good lemon! I really wouldn't mind if this became a series. -Tury
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Reviewed By: BrokenEMO [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. I must say. Congrats! You entertained me. Lmao. Forget I said that. I was just a joke. Anyhoo, this was really. really. really. Good. You should do more like this. *claps* way-to-go! Ja ne!
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