| "Robbing the Cradle" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 10:57 CST
Comment/Review:
YUCK!!!!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the title speaks for it's self.
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Title: a good idea but
Reviewed By: Mirai-Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 12:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I don't have anything against old people which have sex... after all... we all will get old. The idea isn't bad either of a Genkai/Yuusuke pairing. After all... why shouldn't Genkai look for a younger man? The one thing I DO critizise is that it isn't very well written. Instead of Genkai bounding Yuusuke to the bed you could have written an Alternative Story, in which they fall in love with one another and THEN make them have sex. It could have been a very good fic but the way you wrote it... sorry, but I really don't like it.
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 07:13 CDT
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Perhaps you should have had Genkai in her younger form that way it wouldn't seem so much like a, what's the word, pedofile. It's gross, but very well planned out. If you plan to write something like this again, make sure Genkai is younger. That should help with the reviews!!
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Title: GROSS!!!
Reviewed By: Kitsune-rosa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic was original, funny, but very disgusting. I would have NEVER pictured Genkai and Yusuke together, ever. It's just not right. I know you wanted to be creative, but I think you took creativity a little too far...
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Reviewed By: rlelp On: August 26, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm ew lol but it was still really good! but ew lol
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Reviewed By: 8477 On: August 19, 2005 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy Shit that was sick dont write like that again but it was origonal
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