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Reviewed By: Alwyn On: July 15, 2006 17:43 CDT
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The story itself is a little.. character obsessed. In the way that everything revolves around a single character and their life. Sure, that's a basis, but everyone else is alive, too. There is, ahem, LOTS of super duper use of the caps lock key. Loud voices and emphasis can be shown in other ways y'know. After a while.. it just hurts my eyes. You keep trying though, and that's a large part of what makes a good author. Although.. some original names might help.. or original descriptions.. or something.. argh. Keep going! I'm sure your stories will glow their own bright light for all to see, just keep trying. Oh, and as a side note, Kuwabara isn't always stupid. He just has his own way of doing things and he's a good guy. You know it. You all know it, don't deny it-!! ... ignorant fans you all are.. nyahahaha! .. yes, ok. Psycho rant is over. Bye!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue me like
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 20:38 CST
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i lpved this chapter. it was so great. this story is so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 24, 2005 14:09 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 22:48 CDT
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NYAHH!!! JIN KICKS ASS!!! He's my 'home boy' *cough, cough* Anyways, I saw this story earlier today but, I didn't get around to reading it until I got home from my mom's house. WHOOT!!! Great fic, continue please! Peace.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 31, 2005 19:49 CDT
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i loved these chapter. it were so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: glowsticks_rock [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 16:32 CDT
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WOOT! MCR ROCKS AND SO DO YOU!! Yea, I know. I'm kissing up. -_-;; LMFAO. La di da di da... Blech... [Insert Menacing Laughter Here]
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Reviewed By: LubHAruka On: August 22, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa.....that chapter...was so....sad.........IT WAS COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLL! continue! now i must be off to finish my soul purpose....TO GET HIEI AND KURAMA BACK!
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 22, 2005 20:53 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: MCR_ROCKS_ITS_GRACE_LOL On: August 21, 2005 18:45 CDT
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NICE
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 20, 2005 21:06 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: glowsticks_rock [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 20:35 CDT
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I love to review for you. You write all the greatest stories. ^^ Too bad no one likes mine... -_-;;
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Reviewed By: lubharuka On: August 18, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD I LOVED THIS! PLEASE CONTINUE! i'm kinda confused with so much names...BUT I DON'T GIVE! I'm ADDICTED TO YOUR FIC!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!! *grabs hiei and kurama* so that's where you guys where. well you ain't going anywhere now *takes out a giant metal chain* MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *hiei and kurama right now O.O! and runs* U CAN RUN BUT YOU CAN HIDE! but i WILL FIND YOU! (laughs mainaclly)
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 18, 2005 21:17 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: glowsticks_rock [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 12:50 CDT
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No one wants to review my chapetiers. Except you of course. lol.
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