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| "Fire Emblem: The Dark King" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kiyobi K [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it took me a while to get to actually reading this... I like this story. I'm not very sharp on the world of FE:SS, but I kind of get the gist of it. You should give some more background info of FE:SS to those who never played it at all. Good story, I'm enjoying the funny romance between Max and Jira. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more!
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Alright,m good job so far. you might want to pick up some vocab to bring the diction, but you do a good job setting up the character that you're going to use. He does seem to fit the typical "down trodden school kid" type. Good job, and keep submitting to FFARG.
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