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Reviewed By: The he/she Ranma Saotome On: August 15, 2005 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter eight kicks major ass and my sugesstion depends on the location of booz on how wild it gets if ya get my meaning. Sango and Miroku have a healthy supply in the kitchen so the can get as wild as they want InuYasha and Kikio might wake and do stuff on the couch.... in many positions and finaly Kagome and Sess can go either way depending if she has a secret stash of booze lieing around. Though whatever happens the dildo must be invoulved who knows? Sess may actualy know how to weild it like a true "swords man" ^_~.
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Reviewed By: marzeah On: August 15, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome story and i cant wait for the next chapter to come out!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story i hope you write real soon. it was awesome. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes Oh my name is Nyah. I am 15 and i spend most of my time reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours. and did i say your story is very great. email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks alot. please update real soon. lata
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Reviewed By: mizukashii On: August 15, 2005 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... lol I loved it, hey who says that their dildo wouldn't get shy infront of others ::snicker:: I love you fanfiction keep it going it is great!!!
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Title: Chapter seven isn't that bad.
Reviewed By: The he/she Ranma Saotome On: August 15, 2005 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis another review from me and i stick with my opinion that you are good and no you story ain't going down hill i think of it more as a cliff hanger now that Naraku is in the mix. Other wise... it.... was... AWSOME!
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Title: This is good!
Reviewed By: animegeekfreak18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good...,I'd love for you to update NOW! I wanna read what happens next!!!!!!!! Please! UPDATE SOON! ~AGF18
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Reviewed By: Malice_Babe On: August 15, 2005 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! This fic is HI-LAR-I-OUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And can you make the chapters a little bit longer? YOU RULE AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: The he/she Ranma Saotome On: August 15, 2005 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have got to say that you are one of the more talented fanfic writers i have ever seen! I maen I looked at this story thinking that it was going to be the kind that you read the first chapter then stop but you got me hooked and now I want more. ^_~ I would love to know what happens when three couples wind up eating in the same area together. Will it turn into an all out brawl of jealousy or will they under stand each other? Those are some questions i got floating on my brain at the moment. Oh and this is just a minor sugestion if you haven't thought of it you could start doing lemon situations with the three couples. (Sess and Kagome so on and so forth.) Otherwise you are awsome! I cannot wait untill the next chapter. Oh and by the way did i mention you'r an f'in genious
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Title: If it gets any better I am gonna get my all friends to read this!
Reviewed By: The he/she Ranma Saotome On: August 15, 2005 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have got to say that you are one of the more talented fanfic writers i have ever seen! I mean I looked at this story thinking that it was going to be the kind that you read the first chapter then stop but you got me hooked and now I want more. ^_~ I would love to know what happens when three couples wind up eating in the same area together. Will it turn into an all out brawl of jealousy or will they under stand each other? Those are some questions i got floating on my brain at the moment. Oh and this is just a minor sugestion if you haven't thought of it you could start doing lemon situations with the three couples. *cough*orgy*cough* ^_~ (Sess and Kagome so on and so forth.) Otherwise you are awsome! I cannot wait untill the next chapter. Oh and by the way did i mention already your an f'in genious?
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Title: OMFG I THINK IM GONNA DIE OF LAUGHTER!
Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Like the title says!!! Miroku is just TO fuckin funny! 'Hyde Ho!!' and kagome saying 'i have a vagina and i know how to use it' while they were just >.< TO DAMN FUNNY!! LOL u have a great sense of humor and a great style of writing LOL please PLEASE update soon cant believe that anyone could actually make a storry THIS damn funny~~
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Title: jennyxoox
Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i love this story i just came across it today and was like what the hell ill read it im so happy i did you did a good job on your lemmon well keep going with this story please
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Reviewed By: forestdemongirl39 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! i already told you that, but i love it anyways! it's so funny! i can tell that you wrote that because of some of the saying. it's just stuff you would say. you better finish this or i'll kill you! love you :D
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Reviewed By: Foxy_Woman007 On: August 13, 2005 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so great and I'm so Effin' happy that you made it Sess/Kag. They're my favorite couple! You're doing one hell of a job, so keep it up! Hope to see something soon from you! Later! ~Foxy_Woman007
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Reviewed By: forestdemongirl39 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa!! awesome! i love it! i didn't know how you were going to put Kouga in there, but i like how you did. woo! yay! keep going with it!
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Reviewed By: Iesha On: August 13, 2005 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! yay!!! keep going with this.. or i'll hurt you. and don't think i won't because i know where you live!! love you lots, you better have the next chapter by the time i get home tonight! later
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