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Title: Hmmmm.
Reviewed By: Ky0kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your friend told me to read this and give you any ideas I could come up with..So I'll give it my best. I don't usually write InuYasha so I'm not really sure what to do. I like this story. It's original as opposed to other inuyasha fics I've read. So it's a nice. It's got a good plot. Starting from where you've left off in the last chapter.. It seems that Kagome gets a thrill from her job, yet doesn't like the way some of the others treat her. And since she doesn't know Sess knows about it, I think he should witness another one of the incidents then come out and let her know that he knows and that he's worried about her. Just an idea. Also, with Inuyasha. It seems that he's having problems with Kikyo (as it says) If they split up, is InuYasha gonna want to go back To Kagome? And what will his reaction be when he finds out about Her and Sess? (could be interesting) Also with Naraku. I think it would be exciting if there was more with him. Everyone loves a little suspence and violence. Especially when it's with Sesshomaru! And lastly, since Kouga obviously loves Kagome, he should go and 'talk' with sess. One of those 'you hurt her, I hurt you' conversations, not that Kouga could do anything bad to sessy.. Maybe Sess can actually realize what kagome is implying when she pushes him away. Perhaps he can start acting like theyre in a relationship outside of sex? Well I'm outa room. It's a nice story, email me if you need help? the_yaoi_pimp@hotmail.com
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Title: im loving it
Reviewed By: ibangedthepinkranger On: September 01, 2005 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found this story by accident looking for the meaing of kagome in japanese. i sat and read every story. you have one hellava imagination. keep up the good work. im adding this to my favs so i can keep an eye out for future chapters. :-D
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Reviewed By: justmeNno1else [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 23:32 CDT
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^_^ omg, ish really good! Chu better continue! *pulls out stick* or this shall be cracked over your head. ^-^ Lol
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Reviewed By: sessyluvr On: August 23, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story you have to update.
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Title: Wack.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 08:51 CDT
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Hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon. thanks again for the great story
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Title: Wack
Reviewed By: yumi1 On: August 22, 2005 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is great!! i love it like when every one gets all drunk and aks all crazy,Miroku"Hyde Ho"Ha, Ha,Ha that was funny.please keep writing i would really like to resd what happens next.^_^
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Title: Wack.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon
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Title: dude...
Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was... was... AWESOME!!!!!!!!! you must do more!!!!!! or... i will... uh hurt you....? yeah thats right!!!! lol DONT HURT ME!!!!
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Title: MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHH I MUST see more lemony goodness! Update soon! Peace!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your new chapter it was great i hope you update real soon
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry if i didnt make my review to clear from earlier i really do like this story lol its more then funny cuz of how interesting it is, plus you got me hooked lol. I dunno if this is ur 1st story cuz sometimes when u click on 'other works by this author' the page messes up but if this is ur first story im suprised; it doesnt seem like a first story ^_^ hehe; hope i made sense. Love the relationship tension with sesshy and kagome cuz of Naraku and Inuyasha, even tho Sesshy punched him in the face >:D go sesshy!! let'em have it!! He'll pay for what he did! ^.^;; And as for Kagomes dildo. . .*bursts out laughing*
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Reviewed By: goth chick tiff On: August 16, 2005 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fick is fucnking awesome!! i can't wait till you update again!! It is just so funny I was dieing while reading it. keep up the good work!!!
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Title: SESSY'S_iNU
Reviewed By: LORi On: August 15, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY LOVED UR STORiE i REALLY THiNK YOU SHOULD MAKE THEM PLAY SOME TYPE OF DRiNKiNG GAME i THiNK THAT WOULD BE TOTALLY HAWT
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