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| "Advantage point" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: AHHHHH!!!
Reviewed By: ToxicHathor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! omg, omg, omg, that was so amazing, I swear it's soooooo great. Please keep up the wonderful work! I loved reading this! Hathor...
| Title: Well...
Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you haven't updated in a long time, and I know that generally means that it won't be updated. I really hope you decide to add the second chapter. I'm not going to lie and sit here saying you're the best writer in the world. I'm not going to suck up to you to get you to type up the next chapter. What I am going to do is tell you the truth and that is that you are a decent writer. You know how to keep your readers interested and such. I really enjoyed this chapter. So few people write on Loveless, and what's worse is they don't continue on with them because few people read them. The thing is don't punish the fans that do read them and love them. Do it for them and yourself. Lol well I'm usually not serious. Hell I'm not a good writer at all and I get writers block horribly or I just plain forget, but when I write...I write for those who wish to read, even if it's just one person. They're worth it. :D Long story short...too late :P... I love it and I hope you keep up with it. Even if it is just one chapter and I may be the only person reading it, which I doubt, then it's worth it, don't you think?
| Title: oh....
Reviewed By: black_bengal_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! Please do write the next seen! it sounds so good, I love it!!! I love shounen-ai. Real life, shameful, online, FANTIC!!! XD
| Reviewed By: Dead_ACPF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Soubi!!!!!!!!! I was so sad I didn't want to read the sad part I just wanted to skip to the end. But I read it! It was sad, but at least Ritsuka came to the rescue! You are a great writer and I hope you update soon! Keep up the great work, See ya!
| Reviewed By: HER - Not Logged In On: February 24, 2006 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwww, tht was cute, yeah yeah i hope u deffamtly write a sex sence ^^, ya no hurt ur-self u sometimes "blow" over the burse 2 make it bett er muhahahahahaha, nasty :D ha ha ha ha! lmao xD sry, i just really felt like being aprev there WEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ^^ great job on the fic, it turned out exellent so far ;)
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