| "Lifeless" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 15:43 CDT
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I like it so far but its sooo sad. U should make this story into a fullmetal alchemist inuyasha crossover! yah that would be cool.To hve kikyo come and try to take her soul back but songo and miroku get kagome to the well in time to save her then she meets up with ed and al and become a state alchemest and ed heals her broker heart! That would be soooooooooo awsome!
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Title: Lifeless
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good. Are you still using your account? If so please update if possible. I'm sorry for the way I am writing but after reading this I feel ... emotionless. Please update!
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Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 17:37 CST
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It's not that I don't enjoy it i's just that when it makes you sad and it's supposed to that's good right? But is it ENJOYABLE? that's all. It's really REALLY good.. great.. wonderfull... ... ... -_-" I really like... love... ... ... ...it. ... PLease update! ^^ ... ... unless it's done...? If so I am now depressed.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i loved your chapters i hope you update real soon lata my new friend.~*Sweet*~
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Title: Lifeless
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* Li love yer fan fic! Please update ^^ hope ya don't have too much homework. Oy all you people who are reading this... unless you have already reviewed get you damn mouse over there and press the review button, GOSH this person makes a wonderfully sad fan fic and yer not gonna review?! Sorry pples that was fun. I don't mean to nag, it's true but you don't need to feel pressured ^o^ Soooo, if you have the time please review. THANKS! Good fanfic absolutly wonderfull! Pleae update! Please don't think I'm a meddling bitch (sorry if you don't like swearing) I don't mean to act like one :( hehehe Poor Kag. I'm still kinda confused tho :)
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Title: So far so good
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 20:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm really interested in where you take this.
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Title: Shocking!
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there, I gotta say i'm shocked you only have four reviews. This story is good. Please do update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: LinZ On: September 14, 2005 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love it! And I want you to update soon cuz I say so.
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Reviewed By: LinZ On: September 14, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 22:38 CDT
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This is really well written. Really sad. I'm kind of confused though. If Shippo and Kagome are both alive, but dead, then what? And is Inuyasha with Kikyo? Good story so far.
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Title: First Reviewer
Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story i hope you write real soon. it was awesome. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes Oh my name is Nyah. I am 15 and i spend most of my time reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours. and did i say your story is very great. email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks alot. please update real soon. lata
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