Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...where to start. Okay I like the story line, but it needs detail(A LOT of detail), and u have a ton of spelling errors. Not to mention, I did not see one punctuatuation throughout the 1st chapter. otherwise, its okay.....but just okay. it was rushed...
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