| "The Choice of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Okay, I've just recovered from fainting...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This last chapter had me gripping the sides of my desk with my heart in my throat! To start, anyway. Am I a wimp that I nearly jumped out of MY skin when he called out to her as she tried to escape. Yes, I did get the fact that InuYasha was pretty much himself but I don't know the entire story yet so anything could've happened. This chpater has angst and drama written all over it and I can't wait for the next few chapters where things unfold and truths are revealed! Good job, once again!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A second chance for the gang and what is going to happen to poor Yuro in the future? I can't wait to see.
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Title: Wow! I must've been really psyched because I just read through all 3 chapters in less than an hour... **blushes** I'm a REALLY slow reader.
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I've read and now my review... I really, really, REALLY love your writing style and the dream/nightmare sequences are so vivid and frightening that I was literally holding my breath! I'm taking it the Yoru in InuYasha in the future (maybe a reincarnation or something) but I won't know until you reveal in in later chapters. The thing that REALLY has me dying for new chapters is the blood and silver hair! I was like "Oh S*#$! WTH is going ON?!" After uploading 3 chpaters in one day, it would be so pushy for me to ask for more, wouldn't it? But, why be coy now, right? YES, I WANT MORE! This story has so much potential and I haven't been this excited for plot development (in a dark fic) in a good while! So, I'll stop rambling on. I will end it with this; I thoroughly enjoyed the Flashbacks and the vivid imagry...and also the way you write the characters. KUTGW! Oh, Happy Whatever you do in December!
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Title: Yay! A 3 chapter update! Merry Christmas to ME!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 13:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Honestly...I haven't read them yet. **twiddles fingers** I just wanted to let you know how happy I was that you updated! I'll read and review either in a couple hours or tomorrow! **jumps with excitement**
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Title: Awwwww! **stomps like a petulant child**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Don't do this to me! How can you start this potentially awesome story like this and not continue? I want to cry out of frustration! Well, I really was drawn in my the teaser and would LOVE to see where you take this story! PLEASE continue!
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