| "Screaming Bloody Murder" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: TrixieMommy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story. liked the surprise with parents and the shower scene. also liked the premise of the dialogue however needed to be more explicit with the sexual content. when writing a sexual story u dont need so much dialogue especially since the majority of the readers concentrate more on the sex scenes rather than the dialogue. overall pretty good. trixiemommycousin
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Reviewed By: :-P On: August 16, 2005 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If i am not mistaken this is a "Fruits Basket" fanfic...lol...but i'm glad it was with the inuyasha ones because I found it and i loved it!
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