| "Dark Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Krystyn On: April 11, 2007 11:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
update!!! please
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Reviewed By: isenfahyr On: October 29, 2006 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it..brings readers over the edge. i hope you update soon. real soon. :)
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Reviewed By: AnimeJunki07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 04:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi i would like to say that i really enjoy what you have here to far. Just when you think there is a happily ever after something even worse happens. Though i do have a question, what was with the kisses, are Tohru and Yuki going to eventually split up or were those just innocent kisses? I can't believe Yuki started the kiss at least Tohru was the one that got kissed...Anyways i loved this story and i can't wait to see where you are going to take the new couple next...ooooooo does Tohru find our about Jade? Will Akito get the answers he wants? and will Tohru and Yuki stay together or will they get torn apart? These are the questions which haunt me...and which you must answer quickly with an update...lol well until next time...Good night and good rittens...Ja~ne Jessie-chan
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Reviewed By: Okita1209 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ne, please update your fic ... I really want to know what happens next. *drops down on knees and begs* PLEASEEEE~
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Reviewed By: kanti89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 01:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is a cool fanfic hope you write more like it!
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Title: Amazeingness-ness
Reviewed By: Cath E On: March 13, 2006 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS AMAZEING!!! Its Such a good read!!! you must be a pro or something! Please keep on wrighting its been three months! Dont keep us hangin!! lol! Big Love cathy xxx
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Title: OMG!!!!!
Reviewed By: Mizuko Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. your an awesome writer that whole "I can't be around you knowing that you…chose someone else, chose him." His expression lost some of its anger and his grip lessened. He took her hand in his and placed it on his chest. "You feel that?" He asked, his eyes full of pain. "That's what a broken heart feels like." it actually made me cry and it's extremely hard to make me cry. he deserves an Oscar. you have the best writing i've seen in awhile, you have a very special gift.good thing your writing for us otakus lol. keep on keeping on! BAI BAI!!!
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Title: AMAZING~
Reviewed By: bLuBeRRi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 04:33 CST
Comment/Review:
i LOVE this fic. You are a very good writer, very descriptive. I love the plot, the story goes along very quickly, but i say all the better. At least that way it's not dragging. Please update, you seem to have a very good direction and idea for this story. I really wish you'd update....i can't wait to read another chapter.
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 16:14 CST
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Oi! You still haven't updated, I'm sad! I've been waiting for an update for this story for sometime now and I really would love to know what is going to happen now! Please! Please update and add a new chapter soon. I'm going to be checking almost everyday for an update so please don't disappoint me. Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: Demon Priestess Saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!! I love your story! It dark and evil and I love it! I hope you update soon because I am really enjoying this. I haven't had a good story to read in a long time. Great job keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Kyoru Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 04:33 CST
Comment/Review:
it's a new chapter sooo.... im back! you can probably expect me to comment on every new release *nods knowingly* anyway, on to the review! alrighty, i REALLY wanna know why yuki-kun doesn't transform, who the hell this akito-sama's last puzzle piece is, and if kyo-kun will ever get over his heartbreak! oh! (just an idea) maybe kyo-kun will get together with kagura-san, (just for this fic, i really rather like kyoru's but this one's workin' for meh!), and then tohru-chan won't feel so bad, but things will still be awkward. but, like i said, just a suggestion cause this is YOUR fic and your doing great already!
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Title: YEY!
Reviewed By: anime89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE UPDATE!!! i love this fic. although i'd like a lemon here or there but this is awsome!! poor kyo poor poor kyo! he'll get over it right? he better not hurt yuki-kun!
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Title: Jeez your good
Reviewed By: Mizuko Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man you are a good writer. wait. AWESOME writer because this is not necessarily(sp?) my genre of intrest. so that's awesome you've converted me. This is getting soooo good. oh. and poor birdie. Akito is a major DOUCHEBAG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i still don't know what pairing i'm rooting for tohruxyuki or tohruxkyo. It's better than watching a suspenceful movie. your really hooking me and that's very awesome. UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bai-Bai
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wait... so this isn't the end of the story?! Okay then, get ready for that rabid review I was talking about earlier: UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP AND A BIT OF WHIPPED CREAM... PLEASE UPDATE!!! *sobs uncontrollably* I JUST WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS! IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK? *laughs* Joking! In all seriousness, this plot is way too (my new favorite word) intense to be rushed into. this gourmet meal of a fanfic shouldn't be mutilated into cheap drive-through quality. *laughs like a maniac* ............. You know, I am usually pretty good at keeping my cool when it comes to reviewing, but "Dark Prince" seemed to have changed me in ways I can not understand ^___^ *A rabid geam takes over my once thoughtful eyes* >:-} PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love that last line, "...no matter what the price of his heart" Beautiful; on the edge of poetry. I also liked this part, "This kind of nervous made her feel anxious, like waiting to see the dentist." I hate the dentist. Perfect simily to describe how Tohru's feeling. I have to read the last chapter. I promise you I'll leave a lengthy review for the final chapter!!
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