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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:59 CDT
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I cried when they kissed. And then I kicked my desk when Yuki turned all "asshole" on poor Tohru. The worst thing is, I can understand his emotions! I don't want to pity Yuki! I want to be mad at him!! Jeez, you are so good at this. Are you thinking o becoming a professional? That would rock. Well, I'm on to Ch 8!
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:50 CDT
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You really like cliff hangers, don't you? Well, nothing has changed. I still love your story if not more so. I like how you had Tohru talking to her mother throughout your fic so it didn't seem sudden and out of place when it was important to the plot line. I wonder if Hana-chan already knows Yuki is here...? Until next time!
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Title: O_O! Chapter 5
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:39 CDT
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*is currently gawking like an idiot and re-reading the last of this chapter* *whistles, well actually I can't whistle but....* Anyways, that was awesome! So dramatic and climacteric! (if climacteric isn't a word, it should be.) I really wish I could give constructive critisism, but it's hard when a story is so good! I am at lose for words. Great. marvelously, absolutely, wonderful and (dare I say it again?) INTENSE!!!
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:21 CDT
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Before I start to gush about how great you are, I have to say: I'm glad I'm reading this now, when you have this story completed. I can imagine my rabid review now... "UPDATE NOW!!!!11!!! *laughs* I love how tender Kyo is with Tohru while still being Kyo. I hope that makes sense. He kissed her! I wonder how everyone will react with Yuki's return. What will he do when he sees the cat charm around Tohru's neck? Why did Yuki come back in the first place? Why am I asking so many questions when I can just read? ^_______^ great job!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:07 CDT
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*is getting shivers because of the severe level of intensity "Dark Prince" contains* I am loving this fic. Absolutly loving it. It's been months?! Man oh man... Anyways, back to your writing technique (was I ever there...?) I love how you have just the right amount of imagry; just enough to let your readers know what's going on. It's not like we haven't seen sidewalk before, or the sky, or the texture of leaves, and so on. it's amazing how some authors go on and on about the random/useless details! Get on with the story already!!! Ahem... *regains composure* So, in lesser words: Thank you for getting to the point. My favorite part in this chapter was the conversation between Kyo and Tohru. I was surprised at how well you kept Kyo's personality in check. It's not that I thought you couldn't do it... But in most cases Kyo is a horny-angsty teen without a care in the world. Let me tell ya, that gets old quick. I mean, seriously! Good job~!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That scene with Akito and Yuki was horrible. Neccessary, but horrible all the same. Thank you for not going into too much detail during all of that... I wonder how long it'll be before Tohru realizes that Yuki isn't coming back? Will everyone (except Akito, of course) think that he died? Shigure is bound to suspect something, though. *laughs* I really need to start reading Chapter 3! All of these rhetorical questions are a waste of my valuable reading time! *flips hair with a snobby "Hmph"* ^___^ great job~!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 19:35 CDT
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This is awesome work. Outstanding, even. In the end, it's all a misunderstanding. GAH~! Frustrating, yet so well written I am compelled to read on and find what happens next. I love this similie that you used: "Just like the mouse he was, he was trapped in a cage, never to be set free." That's so true! Poor poor Yuki. Thank you for going through each of his emotions in depth instead of saying "Yuki was confused and heart broken..." There is a fine line between 'showing' and 'telling' and you nailed it! I'm of to read the next Chapter. Until next time.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: anime89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THE UPDATE!! akito is soooo creepy!! but the story is great! i love this pairing and ur style is so great. i love how you always leave me wanting more! update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Kyoru Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 20:45 CDT
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wow! ha! lol tohru DID let something slip!^^ and both she and yuki-kun got the answer that they were looking for! wow.... but there's gonna be a dark cloud shadowing there happy days now.... what a twist!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 00:24 CDT
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poor ha'ari... d'you think Yuki'll ever get it that Ha'ari doesn't like doing that?
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Kyoru Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:31 CDT
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OMG! soooooo good! but where was kyo-kun during this whole event? yay! i am sooooooo happy that yuki-kun is taking tohru-kun again! pleeeeaaasssseeee llet her confess something! or at least let something slip from her lips because of her tohru-ish ways *devious smile*
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Reviewed By: Kyoru Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2005 22:31 CDT
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OMG! ( i'm actually writing this RIGHT after i got the email that you had up[dated! { of course this story has been added to my favorites... duh! } ) anyway, i haven't actually read it yet but thank you, thank you, THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! *huggles michelle*
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Title: Who?!!
Reviewed By: Katie_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Its either Yuki or Hari! I DONT KNOW WHICH THOUGH!! So write SOOOOOOOOON! Your story is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: MY GOD!! On: September 23, 2005 19:55 CDT
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OMG!!! a cliffie!! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: KagomeMaire On: September 23, 2005 07:32 CDT
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that isnt cool....i hate when you leave me hanging please write more!!
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