| "Winter Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: sprinklesheep [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2011 11:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have really enjoyed the story so far. please update soon!!! and please keep writing!!! ;3 |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 03:12 EDT
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♥what a lovely story, i guess it has been a fairly long time since you've updated this and a little over two years since you've written anything. it is a true shame because you are a very gifted and talented author. even if you don't finish this (although there is an appalling lack of intelligent, captivating, and well written 'rurouni kenshin' fan fiction) it would be wonderful if you would start writing again. ♣ i beta read for a few 'rurouni kenshin', 'inuyasha' and 'labyrinth' authors and if a bribe would help, i can offer to beta read. or, perhaps you'd prefer chocolate? ♦ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: Kyasarin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 17:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! i really wanna read the rest! your story is excellent!!!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Kyasarin On: October 03, 2005 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE! This fanfic is excellent! Please continue writing! I have been waiting for the next chapter forever! I greatly enjoy reading your story! ^_^ please email me at Spiritdragon91@aol.com when you get the next chapter out!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: WildOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! MAHAHAHA! Please tell me there will be lemons when Kenshin is, ahem, better? If not please limes! Hehehehe. I'm liking this plot a lot, not too much mystery and suspense but just enough to entice but not take away the focus of the characters. Karou and Kenshin already getting hot, steamy, and snoggin! AHAHAH! Okay, but really its going great lemon and lime possiblities aside. Hehehe.
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Reviewed By: sweetums [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 11:55 EDT
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Oh wow! This is so sweet so far. ^^ I may just print this, and add it to meh binder. If I do, be honoured!!! xD *lol* I can't wait to see chapter four up and running!
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Reviewed By: chelisha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 00:31 EDT
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I like it so far. The hole plot is quite intriging, and the characters are pretyy much much in check. Exept the Yahiko usually woodn't do wut kaoru tells him the first time. Other than that, its is pretty good. I like the way you portryed the characters thoughts in such a wayt hat they didn't seem to just be there, they made sense and fit the story line too. i am awating chapter three.
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: akaineko On: August 23, 2005 17:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wa! I finally figured out how to review... pathetic i know but hey... I love this!! i love whre the plot is going or actually I love where i think the plot is going... and I hope everyone in the Kenshin-gumi is gonna be inthis one, kenshin sounds kinda like a normal person!! ^.^ AND WHERE he went "I'm- " was he going to say i'm used to this? abou this wounds? I need to go but Keep up the great work!! 6.^ I loko forward to a new chapter!! ^.^
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