Reviewed By: NarutoRoxMySox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapter was a wee bit too short.. and everything happened way too fast.. WAY TOO FAST they didn't have a conversation or nuffin.. just BAM nakey and well yeah.. anyways, just try to slow things down from now on, it'll do ya good! NONETHELESS this chapter was fun while it lasted
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