| "My Naruto Work of Fanfiction" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: My Naruto Work of Fanfic
Reviewed By: Yin&Yang On: June 15, 2006 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yin+Hey my name is Yin and I really loved ur fanfic. Plesae update it soon. Yang- Names Yang im her twin sis whos older by 3min. Ur story was pretty good. Unlike some others ive read. *Glares at Yin*. Yin+ *Sweatdrops and rubs back of head nervously* Yeah anyways. Reply and tell us if ur goin to update. Update soon. Thanx byebye Yang-Later
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
........0.0...wat no more!!! LOL I WAS SO INTO IT I DIDNT REALIZE WHEN IT WAS OVER!!! LUV THE SASUKE AND SOTA SCENE, IT LOOKS LIKE NOTHING CAN IN BETWEEN THEM.....RIGHT??? XD, ONCE AGAIN WAT CAN I SAY IT WAS SSOOOOOSSSS GOOD!!! I KNO I SAY THIS ALL THE TIME BUT....UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE HE HE!!!
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Title: meh
Reviewed By: Biancer On: March 29, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's not much I can say. Except... 'er...' Hahaha... I couldn't help but get lost in that whole 'techno-haze' Lol. Nice chapter once again. lol, poor Sasuke and Sota, they got interuppted yet again! Lol >=D Well... I hope everyone knows how to swim... *gulps* A speedy update as usual. You've wowed and amazed the judges once more. But who is this assistant to orochimaru, eh? Lol, alright, i'll wrap this up. Cho. GREAT JOB!!!
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Reviewed By: Backlash Symphony On: March 28, 2006 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was definitely the funniest so far! Can't wait until next chapter, and I'm sure we all know that deep down inside the very dark parts of our hearts, the parts that hold every fantasy and want that we shouldn't have, we all know that Orochimaru is not, in fact, "eww-able", but rather a super seductive snake shinobi with kickass moves and a genius IQ. Later!
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOWZERS!!!! THAT WAS WOZERS!!! LOL BRILLIANT REALLY!!! SOTA AND SASUKE R BEGINNNING TO MAKE A REALLY GOOD COUPLE..R THEY? AND YEAH ROMANCE, COMEDY, ACTION, AND SUSPENSE!?!? UR KILLING ME HERE....IN A GOOD WAY. HE HE UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Kay/Kai On: March 17, 2006 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! You updated!!!! *SUPER MEGA GLOMP* That was so great!! ^^ Keep up the great work!!
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Title: fantastical yet again
Reviewed By: Biancer On: March 17, 2006 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness gracious me! Wow... Sota + Sasuke + Arguing = ....*cough* lol!!! nice chapter, Keep writing!!! Mr. Snake-man has interesting ways of...well, TREATING his guests... *cough* Thine new name shalt be dolly! *dubs thy* XD, Narashi rules!!!! hahah lol... she deserves a high five and a round of applause... *starts clapping* oh, heck yes... X_X that was too funny.... Neji got so mad... ^^ oh my, Aoi is quite afraid of the dark, the storm moved in very.... fast.... wonder what's going to happen? The place get flooded? ooooh, but what if orochimaru was EXPECTING them to EXPECT that HE'D expect them to do something original, so in all truth he was EXPECTING them to climb up and go through a window! XP Wow... I just wanted to type that to see how it'd look.... Oh my, aren't double guessings bad?! ^^ Cho, nice chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZINGS!!! PLEASE PLEASE, TO MUCH ANTICIPATION!! and jusdt who is this uchiha?? GOTTA KNO!! ITACHI CAME IN!!! LOL, SO HOT!!! please update soon!!! (like always)
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Title: hm.. ooh...
Reviewed By: Guess who On: March 06, 2006 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmmmm, I liked this alot... Not much left to say but... 'whoooooooooooooooooooooa' .... AWEEEEEEEEEEEEESOME another Uchiha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!!!! *squeals* I can't wait till your next chapterR!!!!!! Oh wow... itachi, evil evil eviiiiiiiiiiil. Is he looking for The new character...? ooooh, fun fun fun... What's happenning with AOIIIIIIIIIIII?!?!?! T___________T awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, maaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!!!!! Poor Kaka and Aoi!!!!!!!! gosh! How can they get out!??! And wow. I HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE OROCHIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAARU!!!!!!!!! no offense. But my hatred runs deep for this snake guy.
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! LOL!!! THAT WAS AO GOODS!!! I LUVED ALL THER FLUFFY SCENES!!! LOL!!! EVERYONE IS HOOKING UP!! ITS BY TIME SASUKE GOT A GIRL TO SEE HIM STRAIGHT!!LOL, I WANTS MORE!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON SO I CAN C SOME MORE FLUFFIES!!!
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....of course... you did the pain JUST to spite me didn't you... of course you did... ahh!!! what's happening to Aoi!?!?!?! I Hope it's not what I THINK it is!!! Oh great goddess of cliff-hangers, I pray thee, STOP BEING SO MEAN TO YOR READERS!!!!!!! *bows low* Update soon!!!!!!!!! n___n I liked that scene with Sota and Sasuke!!!! n______________________n It was awesome!!!! wahahahah! I wanna read mooooooore.... *presses face against screen and slides down* *laughing insanely* meanie meanie meannnnnnnnnnnnie.... *giggle*
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Title: AWWWWWWWWWWWESOME!!!!
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHATWHATWHATWHAT?!?!?!?! *presses face to screen* WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT HAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPENEd?!?!?!!? OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!! YOU ARE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEAN!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAH UPDATE SOON!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!...AHHHHHHHHHHHH...Ah....ah... *passes out*
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO...AMAZING!!!!! BEST CHAPTER YET!!! IM DYING HERE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! UR AWESOME!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
once again dude u hav shown wat an awesome writer u r!!! write more cuz i cant wait!!!! u rock!!!
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Title: W00000000t!!!
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, Fantastic Job! n____n I can't wait until the next chapter. LOl The fighting scenes were awesome! And dude! LOLOL! Aoi falling through the ceiling and knocking the ANBU out! HAHAH, Priceless! *shakes head and laughs* I enjoyed reading this alot! lol! I can't wait for the next chapter! *Gai smile*
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