| "Proposal Of A Challenge" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Yay! Uke Preparation!
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! That was really good! Most especially because you didn't make the mistake that most of the first time yoai writers make...You prepared your uke! Yay! You made a happy uke of Mitsuo! Good for you!
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Reviewed By: elleven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your fic, i loved EQ but it always kinda teased you cauce they never did ANYTHING! thanks for filling in the blanks, i liked it! ^_^
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Title: Yatta!!!
Reviewed By: Chii. Hikari On: September 06, 2005 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fan fic was so cool I hope that you will write more of these. For your first time it was so cool reading it I had so much fun! please e-mail me when you have more Eerie Queerie fam fics at d.brown1841@comcast.net ^.^ keep up the good work ^.^
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair (not logged in) On: August 20, 2005 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very well done for one of your first fics. You asked for honesty, and you shall have it, the plotline was very well done, and very cute, I enjoyed it quite a bit. The lemon was a little rough, but accurate, and excellent for a first fic. You are braver than I was when I wrote my first fic! ^_^ Please write more, or feel free to email me if you would like to talk and whatnot! footballpyro777@yahoo.com Love ya, Aria Lerendeair
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