| "Turquoise Bracelet" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 15:12 EDT
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Hehe heh, I've played this game, but back in high school no one ever went through with the full om fucking......accept maybe a few people.
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Reviewed By: dizzy_otaku On: April 09, 2007 02:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG noooooo... How could you do this to ME?:[ I actually went online looking for this fanfic on google after it was taken off fanfiction.net! I really liked it too... How could it just end like that? Please tell me you're going to continue it. T-T Err!! Its a wonderful fic. Please continue!!
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Reviewed By: Chatzli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I had been kicked off of MM.org and only got a new account so this story could be on my favorites list so I could read the update of chapter 20, when it arrives. I also finished rereading the whole thing, it is so lovely. I sort of hope that Daisuke catches Riku cheating when he goes to tell her the wedding is off. Or better yet goes into labor while he is there, telling Riku she should take a leaf from her sisters book or whatever. This is my all time favorite story by the way. Na
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Reviewed By: astral.silentmobius On: March 06, 2007 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, as I expected of it. It got me hooked, and I wasn't expecting that. You made me read it for 3 times in 1 day... I never had the chance to sleep visualizing every scene...
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Reviewed By: Tricky Thief On: January 16, 2007 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so good! I almost cried! They're so sweet together! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! ~T.T.
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Reviewed By: DesertThorns [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 18:20 EST
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Wow, this story is absolutely, amazing. I like your style and the plot of this. Please don't give up on it, and keep up your hard work.
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Title: i love Satoshi
Reviewed By: jujubean On: January 10, 2007 21:33 EST
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so its going to be awhile the next time i can review, beause i don't have a computer, i owe money to the library, and i don't have a car to ride a newdkidt's house to use her computer. but she reads them over the phone for me, she such a good friend so i'll ask her to write my reviews for me. so anyway can you please update thanks
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Reviewed By: Mimikosayachi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 18:52 EST
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where is the next chapter? I need it. I CRAVE IT! now please update.
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Reviewed By: Yunni On: December 29, 2006 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always like mpreg fics. I have fun reading this fanfics. If I am to comment,it is about the irresponsible Dark. It is Dark who wear the bracelet in the first place, it is not fair for Daisuke to endure the whole consequence by himself. Why not make him switch with Daisuke for a while?
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Reviewed By: sensei_musume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 05:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. it is really original and follows the characters very well from the manga and anime series. please figure an ending cause it is a very lovely story.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 11:07 EST
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OMGosh you have to update this was just tooooooo gooooood.
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: November 19, 2006 14:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLLLLLLLEEEEEAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finish this fic, update it soon! I'm literly hypervenhilating here! Update it when you can. OM Ra! What have done to deserve this torture! *shouts this while her head spins*
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Title: gay marriage in Japan
Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know this may help but gay marriage in Japan works that one of the two enter into the others family registry it looks more lke an adoption than a marriage. This fic is great by the way made me very happy.
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: November 09, 2006 06:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I love all your stories...the updates are really quick recently...keep up the good work...I'm loving it!
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Reviewed By: Lurala On: November 09, 2006 03:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You've UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've waited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a VERY talented writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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