| "Turquoise Bracelet" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: OMG!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg omg omg that was just so so so so so beautiful... I just loved this chapter so much... well the ending at least... and thank god it's not the end.... although I'd be happy it just wouldn't be enough to satisfy me.... *sighs*, but you had me worried in the beginning there my god... there was a point when I actually thought Satoshi might have died, and then the part where I thought Daisuke might actually pick Riku, needless to say I cried like no other... but you made up for it at least. but yea very very good job... I'm still a huge fan of yours, I love your work sooo much. O right I was meaning to ask you in chapter 18 the song that's in there... what's it called and who is it by??? if you know.. I'm in love with the lyrics and I keep forgetting to ask you... if you have the name and artist email it to Lost.In.The.Rain.84@googlemail.com long name I know.... I'm not very good with coming up with names... anyway I loved this chapter and I really hope that it does take as long for you to write the next chapter as it did this one... I know you've had comp troubles and all... and school must be hard to so take your time ^^.... Ps - sorry this is so long V V
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Title: Sammi
Reviewed By: silversammi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 20:37 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! You have to continue! Ive stayed up till about 3 in the morning reading your fic. Ive read your other one too and i love them PLEASSEEE hurrry! Im addicted.!!
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Reviewed By: Lurala On: October 15, 2006 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS ONE!!! Please continue to update! it's been soooo long! I must find out what happened next! u havn't updated since August 15!! that is so very long ago! So please update this is one of my absolute favorites!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Yea I'm back again
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea I'm just writing you again like I did for the other fanfic I want you to update!! you didn't take my advice it's been over a month since you've updated... I'm sorry I know that you're low on ideas so take your time... but not to much time. I'm sorry I sound demanding... well probably because I am... ok starting over just write when you get the chance I'll be waiting... and that's not ment to be creppy even though it sounds like that
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Title: grr
Reviewed By: xXjovieXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 03:09 EDT
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So is this it?? You are just going to let Satoshi die like that?? *tear* He can't die. . . He has twins to attend to. You should have seen me as I was reading that last chapter. I was yelling at the computer like I always am. >< I'm such and emotional girl I tell you. Well yeah this was a good story. I hope you continue it because you are really good at this. But your editors really need help becuase I found a million errors. But yeah. I liked it. .::jovie::.
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 01:17 EDT
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wow must have more did or will satoshi die. love it .^_^.
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad Daisuke, Bad! Riku is not the right chioce, and once you give birth you really won't be able to give up the baby to Satoshi.
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Reviewed By: Sarahfreak On: August 30, 2006 08:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DON'T KILL SATOSHI....I want Dai and him to get together...PLEASE Update soon...please?
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 18:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
no! Satoshi musnt die! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: bluerose24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 19:56 EDT
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I hope that you update this story soon. It is really good so far and I would love to read more of it. I want to know what happens with Satoshi.
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola On: August 18, 2006 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH THANK YOU FOR FINALLY UPDATING!!!! I have waited SOO long and I almost thought that was the end of Tourquoise Braclet!! I almost gave up and almost never came to see if it was updated again. Thank you so much for updating! I really love this one update again soon ok! Thanks!
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Title: 0.o
Reviewed By: Yami_hime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 14:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
This can't be the end of Sato-kun!!! I luv him!! But.. if it's the end of sato then also the end of krad... Ohmigod! Well, great fic!!! write on!!
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Title: BTW...
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 04:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
by the way just thought I'd tell you i loved how you made Riku into a two timmer... I like it at the time, but now there engaged that's not right! poor daisuke is going to go into labor early from stress or something and now with Satoshi!! O GOD! I just pieced this together...what if he miscarages V V that would be depressing... or if something happened to satoshi! o jeez I need to stop thinking because I just keeping coming up with worse case scenarios here....
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Title: Ok so yea I have alot to say!!
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea so i'm reading la ti da I was so happy and then you go writing about chocolates and truffles at that one of my favorite deserts.... just make me drool all over my dad's lap top fine... ok so i'm reading aHHHH!!! what happens I seriously couldn't breathe and then I burst into tears... (yea i'm a cry baby I no) and I thought I had a bad day this is terrible!!! what happens??????????????? sorry but I'm freaking out here ahhh! yea so you no it would great if you didn't wait a month to update again... if possible of course. Please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LalRaLuLa On: August 03, 2006 09:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I abosolutely LOVE the story so don't stop!!!! Please continue writing and updating cause I have to know what happens next. so again update update update update update for all of you reading fans. I come to see if you updated every single day and you are disapointing me by not doing that so will you please update for me and the rest of you fans. we want to know what happens and not all of us can write great stroies like this ourselves so we need pleople with this exseptional writing abilities to write these magnifisent stories for us. I really hope you update cause I know that I have checked everyday for about a month and if you don't update soon I will no longer see if you updated cause I will have asumed that you had stoped writing your story. one thing is for sure and that is that at most if you don't update within 2 weeks I will no longer come here so please don't make me not come here cause I really do love this one of a kind magnificent original work of art! update ok thanks!
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