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Reviewed By: Storm On: July 03, 2002 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awsome as usual. The way you found a way to mix the so called 'real world' with that of the DBZ charactors is genius! I never would of thought of the charactors lives being recorded and then those records being sold. Its great! Charactors are well developed and overall its probably (in my opinion) one of your best fics I've ever read. I've read most of the ones you have posted up here by the way. Anyways I think I've said enough. Can't wait for the next chapters (for all your stories) so keep writing.
Storm |
Reviewed By: hippiechick On: June 19, 2002 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting really good. I feel bad for dismissing it when you had it up on ff.net. I should have had a little faith in your abilities. I was sorry when this chapter ended. I can't wait to read what happens at the party. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick On: June 11, 2002 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. It's not as difficult to understand as I thought it would be. I'm plesantly surprised! I just love Vegeta and the things you do to torture him in your stories! I can't wait until I have the time to read the next chapter. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick On: June 11, 2002 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. It's not as difficult to understand as I thought it would be. I'm plesantly surprised! I just love Vegeta and the things you do to torture him in your stories! I can't wait until I have the time to read the next chapter. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick On: June 11, 2002 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it overall, but it is confusing with so many new characters. I have a feeling I'll be going back and reading this again. You did a good job of creating the characters' histories. I think I'm going to like the rest of the story when I read it. I figured you were the most like Mona after reading how you torture the characters in you other stories! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: May 20, 2002 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good. So, Veg confesses. I will have to read these adventures of these people....
Hmmm, so a Vegeta/Trunks scene? Maybe training? Continue.....
Ah, the spelling was bad.... Maybe you used spellchecker a bit too freely? Meant instead of met and a pond instead of upon.... That's all though. Great grammar as usual.
Yes, I am working on DoY,, but if you want quality work you'll have to be as patient as Vegeta was on Namek waiting 4 days for Krillin and Gohan's ki to show. I'll try to have it out before the end of the month but--FINALS!!!! (eep) |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 05:11 CDT
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hey jb!!! this is so cute haha! ive missed you!!! there has to be more of your stuff i can catch up on! good job! :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 19, 2002 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, who would've guessed that at one time Mona was a cruel pig! Glad to see she's changed her ways. I think that her talk with Veggie has actually helped him. Can't wait to read more. Good job JB! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 18, 2002 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a really good chapter! i'm glad you updated it, i was beginning to think you never would. that would be a real loss, this story is so interesting! that mona character sounds really cool! scary, sadistic, but cool! just like vegeta! |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 01, 2002 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO!!!!!! This is tooo cool and I just got to your most recent chapter. I need to read MORE! please? ah, well, I suppose you have more important things to do, but I'd really appreciate it! I love this story, it's so creative and original! Those Magic characters are pretty interesting. So far Mona's my fav (as is any Vegeta fan). I like the introductions, I think it would be really neat to read a story just about them. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 28, 2002 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, so the talk with Daisy did help. Now all Mona has to do is get Veggie to talk and maybe things can get back to normal (that is, if you consider the Briefs family normal). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 12, 2002 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, Veggie's a stubborn one, isn't he. I thought Daisy's talk with Trunks would've help things at home. Guess not. That's ok I've been wrong before. Btw, if you're having writer's block, take your time. A good story (like sex ^_~) should not be rushed. C ya |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 10, 2002 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
MORE! Golly girl! I wasn't going to read this! But I understand it and it's angst! I love angst! Very good! Continue please!
12 for orignality |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 27, 2002 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww, that was so sweet of Daisy to help out Trunks like that. Now everything will be back to normal in the Briefs household (did I say normal?). Great job JB, write more soon. |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, you cant let it stop now...poor Vegeta...poor Trunks...the drama the sadness... i wanna go and cry!!! |
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