| "Long Time Man" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kakashi's Uke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 21:50 CST
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Hope you continue very soon, seems very promising!!
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Reviewed By: pen and ink On: June 17, 2008 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your writing is so well developed. your style is clear and wry and funny and heart-wrenching all at once. please resume this fic, sometime, anytime. I want more. I love your portrayals of Kakashi and Iruka, especially Kakashi.
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 03:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work!! Nice way to let Iruka know Naruto waqsn't actually dead. Why complete? There is so much more you could do with this!
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Reviewed By: Crystal Blue On: May 30, 2006 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story!! But please oh please tell me this isn't going to be the only chapter of this wonderful work!! :wibble:
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH I love it. You have a way with words. Seriously. I wonder if this shall be a Kakashi and Iruka get together than? I hope it is...At first I was like BLARGH about the couple but now I am coming to like it. XD
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 17:52 CST
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Excellently written. Are you going to update ever? It's November now... I really enjoy your Iruka/Kakashi fics, and I hope you'll write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Shikoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow. i also thought that this would be a fanfic about the growing relationship while iruka mopes about naruto. jee, the scene in the bedroom was in some ways really good. it was so odd and disconnected-- really like kakashi. good job! i'm dying for more!
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Reviewed By: SHODDYNAMESAKE On: September 23, 2005 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH! That was awesome! SQUEEEEEEEEEE! There was that tension!~ And I love your Iruka! WAIIIIIIII! MOre more more more more more more!
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Title: Dear Jesus!
Reviewed By: Midnyte Wolf (-too lazy to sign in) On: September 20, 2005 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Enjoyment Factor would be through the ROOF right now if I had an effin' choice! Oh. My. God. *hypervintilates* This is the answer to my prayers!!! *victory dance* I'm sorta, kinda new to Naruto and only after a few episodes (and some reads of the manga) did I flip and take off for fanfiction. I originally wanted to see something with Naruto and Sasuke (freak for yaoi- oh yeah! whoop!)but for some reason every story left me unsatisfied in some way. Then I realized after someone else's kindness... Iruka and Kakashi are my favorite two! I have a whole new obession, with very high expectations, wants, and needs, not just any old IrukaxKakashi fic. *faints* The story was... so... *swoooons* Oh, I completely love the way everything is happening, the character! Dear Jesus! I hate it so much when people write a story with their couple and in little to no timing it's like *poof!* "ohmigod! I love you!" "I love you too!" When really things might not happen like that, at all... And of anything it might take a roller coaster dive. I was SO EFFIN' relieved at the slow intimate progress! Things just flowed, dream-like, the way I had HOPE a fic of these two would! I practically feeeeel everything happening and it all made sense! Hallelujah! *another victory dance* Oh goodness... I'm out of breath... HURRY WITH MORE!! I would utterly die for a lemon of these two, I have yet to see one with such a WONDERFUL story line to go along with it... YOU ARE MY HERO!!! *smooches*
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Reviewed By: flay On: August 22, 2005 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow. i also thought that this would be a fanfic about the growing relationship while iruka mopes about naruto. jee, the scene in the bedroom was in some ways really good. it was so odd and disconnected-- really like kakashi. good job! i'm dying for more!
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Reviewed By: Sahara Storm On: August 19, 2005 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Seems like this one is gonna turn out really well. I'm quite interested so far. You had me completely blindsided for a moment there, though. I was thoroughly convinced that the story was going to chronicle Kakashi and Iruka's growing relationship while the search for Naruto and Sasuke went on. Now that that possibility has been eradicated, I'm quite piqued to see what you'll do with the following chpaters. Hmm..... I'm not good at titles. This one is good. At least it isn't completely random, and has some meaning and connection with the characters. :-) Anyway, geat job so far. Update soon! :-) ~Sahara Storm
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Title: Huh
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 00:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm feeling rather lazy so... cool story. ^__^b I like the title too, btw.
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