| "Big Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2011 09:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH,....GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS....is....SO....funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i...ca..cann't...stop..loughin'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: PerfectCell17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:33 EST
Comment/Review:
LAMO! thats what mr shu gets! especially after being soo damn mean to Gohan!
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Reviewed By: preety_lady_serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 01:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great and hillaroius. That will teach him to mess with Vegeta and Trunks. But for a moment I thought they were going to blast him to the next dimention. I mean this is what I would do.
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Reviewed By: SaiyanGirl On: January 24, 2003 13:09 EST
Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! I'll say it was a big mistake! He shouldn't of messed with one of Vegeta's kids! I know how Vegeta is. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 18:53 EST
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Aaaaw. Very cute. |
Reviewed By: Crowsi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 11:53 EDT
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LOL Great story! One of my familes rules is not to mess with the children... |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2002 13:55 EST
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Hehehehe that was funny. A very original and well thought out fic. I like that mr shu ended up in the dump, that was funny, although i think Vegeta would incinerate him for whiping his daughter. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2002 00:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HE HE HE HE HE! It takes a real morron to mess with Vegeta's little princess. Can't wait to read your next fic. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 08, 2002 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOL-hysterical fic! I couldn't stand that jerk when he was Gohan's tutor, it was good to see him get his at the hands of Bura. Oh, and I just love the casual conversation between Krillin and 18 regarding the poor bastard's fate. Good Job |
