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| "Morning Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: Kuroiaki05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best sess/rin fanfic I've ever read. I love the plot line to this story the shadow lover. Awesome! =^-^=
| Reviewed By: Kuroiaki05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best sess/rin fics I've ever read. The plot work of this story is amazing and your details are extrodinary.
| Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 05:21 CDT
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Hey, your anonymous note-leaving is off. MM did it to everyone. I fixed mine, thought you'd like to know...........I'm glad you like my fiction. I think it sucks, lol. I'm just not very happy with it at the moment. ::sighs:: But you write what I love to read. I wish I could write something so beautiful and peaceful. Sesshomaru is so well written in your hands. I always tend to make him soft. I have a hard time keeping him hard because I'm so much like him, but not with my mate. When she's around, I'm nothing like I normally am. In private, I'm a whole other person with her, and I hate it, but she makes me that way somehow, lol. And here, I think your description of his actions is perfect. How he swells with pride, but would not admit it. Little things like that make your fic totally four-star. :D
| Reviewed By: Aaron12341 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 16:11 CDT
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You are going to Homecomming???? And it isn't with me???? BAH
| Reviewed By: IT On: September 21, 2005 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fanfic because it has a kind of jist and it has a spark and it is way enjoyable i'd just love to know where you get all the great and inspirating ideas from, i love the story.
| Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 07:28 CDT
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A foster sister? Hmmm... this could get hot... lol just kidding. But you're not going to make me suffer, and you're not going to make me beg. This next chapter will be explosive, so to speak... and if it's not, I'll just whine like a little bitch. lol. Awesome awesome awesome... you rock. ;)
| Reviewed By: DA (not logged in) On: August 25, 2005 15:38 CDT
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Look at it this way, all the stories that I've seen with an excentric amount of reviews are either grammarical corrections to really bad authors or quick notes for the really good authors (who are often fairly successful authors in 'real' life). Instead of getting mad at your readers set up a section at either the end or the beginning of each chapter and reply/thank all of the people who have been responding and then put something that requests reviews, EX something cute and/or funny and/or shamelessly begging. DO NOT THREATEN YOUR READERS! It is increadably rude and demonstrates the maturity of a five year old throwing a tantrum.
| Reviewed By: Lucient, never signed in as usual On: August 24, 2005 03:21 CDT
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He savored it on his tongue like a rare wine, mellow and sweet like her. Sharp and defined like him. Perfect......................................That is the single best group of lines I've ever read. I loved it. I could almost taste those pancakes. Hmmm... I might have to go make some. lol XP And as far as reviewers go, I have more reviews on YY than I did on the divine prison. Not to mention out of about 8,000 hits on TDP, I got like 60 reviews, lol. People are too lazy to stop and say "hey, that was great", or "tweak this". I didn't like the brittish sesshy, but I did think it was adoreable when Rin childishly smacked and sucked at her syrupy pancakes, playing with them and piquing his interest. That seems like a very possible scenario between the two. And by the way, I'm killing whoever's on the other line of that fucking phone too.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 04:43 CDT
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Like hell you're going to stop writing this fic. ::scowls:: What if I leave you six reviews? Or even better, I can plug your fic when I post the next chapter of Beautiful Promise................I know how it feels to have like 600 hits and 3 reviews, most of my fics were that way. And although I am still a fairly new writer, I have about 6 or 8 friends who note religiously. I rarely get notes outside of that. You have to think about your pairings as well. I doubt I would get any hits if they didn't have Inuyasha and Kagome in it, because it IS Inuyasha's show, and that's what people come for. I don't know what the horrible obsession with Kagome being with Sesshomaru is... he hates her, lol. I hate that coupling too... Maybe I should tell you how much I loved you fic? Oh yes, I did, and you'd better email when the next installment comes. I thought along with it being hot that it was insightful. I like the playful Sesshomaru, that is how he would be with her. It's extremely well written. I like how Sesshomaru made her so nuts she couldn't even make breakfast. That's how things should be, and for some people, that's how things are. so... uh... Write on! ;)
| Reviewed By: Aaron12341 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GET ON WITH THE LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!! :P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P:P P.S. I told you I like this stuff :P:P:P:P:P:P
| Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. thanks for telling me
| Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 04:06 CDT
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Sweet... can't wait to see what happens next! I'm 0st! woohoo! :)
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