Reviewed By: seto lover On: August 19, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good, but i think you should make it longer with more sexual detail and more sexual action between them. besides the grammar mistakes it was good. i liked it. you should make a bakura/marik fic...a really hot,passionate, and sexual one. if you do can't wait to read it. ^.^
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