| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: moongal850 On: August 28, 2005 00:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a few things that could be touched up to make the flow a bit smoother. But not too much. Im on the computer a ton and I wouldnt ever mind being a beta reader for you. I can smooth things out for you so you can spend more of your time writing and a little less on the editing. That is what beta slaves are for. ^.^ Im all available if you need one. I would be honored. moongal850@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome. Cant wait to read the next chapter. If it is anything like your last story Making Things Right, I am in for a realy treat. Keep it up cant wait to read more
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Reviewed By: leila-chan (NSI) On: August 19, 2005 14:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was pretty intense. i loved it. i guess it takes something like that to get inu's head straight, huh. poor kagome. such bad luck. but maybe it will turn out o.k tho. i don't know where the story is going exactly, but i know it's gonna kick @$$, so i can't wait for more chaps. please update when you can. about beta-ing, i wouldn't mind, but i'm not too reliable. i go out of town alot and i have a daughter in preschool. my time is not my own!...except when i'm readng fanfiction. (mommy time) heh ^__*
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 09:42 PDT
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Oh my GOD! That was so sad!!! :( This is shaping up to be an amazing story! I read through it carefully and I only saw one or two mistakes, but nothing too major. If you need a beta feel free to email me and I'll beta for you. I can't wait to read more of this story.
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