| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Stephmote On: September 20, 2005 19:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont know what you are talking about I thought that this chapture was a good one. I like how you are showing us that Kagomes family is exepting him for him. Keep up the good work. Cant wait to see what you have instore for us next chapture.
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 20, 2005 05:27 PDT
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I know that you don't really like how this chapter came out, but considering how Inuyasha takes talking and/or accepting how he feels, and listening to how others feel. this chapter came out not bad at all. I at least liked it. and am happy that a new chapter has been posted. thank you. and keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: Ponty On: September 13, 2005 23:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was well presented and I had no trouble reading it, it was a very enjoyable story and I hope you continue your work on it. I hope to see Kagome regain her memories however the story could still take an interesting turn if she didn't, hopefully you will update soon I look forward to it Pontathon
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Reviewed By: stephmote On: September 12, 2005 18:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very happy with what you have writen. THe way that it flowed was very good. Cant wait to read more. I wish you would post more offten then just every week but that is cool. Loving the story. keep up the good work!
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Title: simply beautiful
Reviewed By: tiggrchic82 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very original, great characterization, keep it up I can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kajunmom76 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Can't wait until the next one!!
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade (nsi) On: September 12, 2005 07:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Not signed in - sorry Well you asked for a review and so I shall deliver ^_^ This chapter, as well as previous ones, is beautifully written. The story line keeps a good pace and gives information/details when needed without overdoing it. I like how you prtrayed Kagome coming out of the coma. Too many times have I seen people writing it as if as was never hurt and everything was great when she woke up. You, however, kept it very realistic. Keep up the good work, I'll be watching you ^_-
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Title: beutiful
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 05:28 PDT
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I can't belive it...I almost cried on this one. you put Kagome's feelings as she woke up just right. i'm just hoping that your next chapter does not take as long to get up. i was almost afraid that you had for got about it. Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 08, 2005 21:29 PDT
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I belive that you are doing a terrific job so far. i'm just hoping that you'll update soon. thanks for an enjoyable read.
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 23:59 PDT
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Excellent so far, though I've something of a pet peeve for "Inuyasha thwarting muggers/freaking-rapists only to LET THEM GO afterward" scenarios. He could at least knock them unconscious or something so we can assume authorities come by to pick them up later. *sigh* Oh well.
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Title: lovely story
Reviewed By: fanking On: September 05, 2005 22:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my hearty congrats to u! i must complement u on ur story. it really captures the essence & depth of inu's relationship with kags. very touching up till now. hope u dont dissapoint me with later chapters. i am a sucker for happy endings! dont make us 'eager fans' wait to long ok! ciao!
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Reviewed By: thoughts On: September 01, 2005 07:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A lovely subtle delicate fanfiction. I am looking forward to the rest of this story. You are showing the emotions without the need for a huge conflict. Well written and engrossing. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Stephmtoe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 22:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, I like how you made Kaogmes mother have the oppertunity to bond with Inuyasha. I have not seen that before. Any way keep up the good work and cant wait to see the next posting!
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Reviewed By: Kajunmom76 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story!!
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Title: Good start
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 28, 2005 18:18 PDT
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I'm enjoying some of the interesting touches here: InuYasha being calmed by Kagome's scent is a good character note - especially mentioning the "best night of sleep he'd ever had." I like it when authors have little references to the anime or manga in their chapters, but it does bring the canon universe into the ficverse. That being so, I have to wonder why InuYasha doesn't just go and visit Kags in the hospital. He seems to be able to sniff out Kagome and navigate the city without too much trouble. Some of the other reviews have mentioned a choppy flow to the story so far, but this is more than outweighed by your inventive writing and feel for the characters.
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