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| "Owl Song" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: GutterBall (not signed in) On: March 12, 2008 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give "originality/creativity" a hundred, I'd do it. I love this fic. I love how it takes that ol' fanfic cliche and craps all over it. Heck, I've even tapdanced a little too close to that plot disaster. But this...oh, this. OE, you never cease to amaze me. You go from The Lost DBZ Movie to something so gut-wrenching, so dark and full of betrayal of the worst sort, of pain and blood and madness. God love ya, kiddo, because I certainly do! Many, many thumbs up.
| Reviewed By: Rourinu On: December 26, 2006 23:39 CST
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*whistles* Wow. Sucks to be Goku AND Vegeta in this fic. I like how your portrayed Goku in this fic though. He was still naive and trusting in the beginning, which is what caused him to become vulnerable, but he still fought it and had some backbone throughout the whole ordeal. Great fic!
| Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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This was a new one on me but it was worth the reading. Vejita was just down right scary. Nice work.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 18:44 CDT
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This one grabbed your attention from the get-go, held on and then gave you and ending that made your blood run cold. Sweet! You did an awesome job making it chilling. Obsessive Vegeta was downright scary. Great job.
| Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: September 06, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank GOD! A Vegeta raping Goku fic that DOESN'T glorify rape, or say that it's okay! You DIDN'T make Goku magically somehow fall in love with Vegeta, or give in like everyone else! And, for that, I'm glad. Those other rape fics make me sick. I'm feeling a bit ill now, but not nearly as much as I do when I read one of *those* *shudder* Thanks for writing this, it's just way more realistic. I hope your sequel to Degager is working well, and I shall review your fics later ^-^
| Reviewed By: Firefly01 On: August 20, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... a fantastic fic! You kept everyone in character so well given the situation, so kudos for that. Not many can do that. I love your writing style too. A job well done. Hope to read more from you soon :)
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