| "A day in the life of a pervert. (FFC)" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kricket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Marvelous...really..I've read this once before...oh, wow...
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* Materfully written! The moment when he almost has Videl was so hilarious! And the ending... hahahahah! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Couldn't stop laughing! *tries to breathe but can't because she's laughing to hard*
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Reviewed By: 6549841 On: November 08, 2004 17:26 CST
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wonderful! I haven't laughed this hard in a long ass time
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Reviewed By: Lost soul On: April 15, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word...hilarious. Great job on this. It was definitly worth reading ^_^ |
Reviewed By: idk On: November 07, 2002 07:38 CST
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OMG that was so funy! LOLZ |
Reviewed By: Dark Illusions [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2002 09:34 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol. Interesting. I'm not a very big DBZ fan, but this was an acception. Hehe. |
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 09:16 CST
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You did a great job with this. I found all the references that were in the contest guidelines. **looks at own contest entry and sighs** I could almost feel affection for the little pervert and found myself thinking "Let him get a feel would ya." Two big thumbs up. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 20:00 CST
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LMOA @ the ending "Digital or Analog". I can totallly see Veggie cracking a joke like that.
Kewl fic! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2002 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOLLOLLOL!!! Very Very funny! I love that the old pervert got a happy ending. HE HE! Good Job. |
Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 04:49 CST
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Aw, I could editorialize it, but that wouldn't be much fun.
The pacing seemed a bit jumpy at points and you could have broken up some of the bigger paragraphs to give a better effect, but overall I liked it! "It's not fair when they can hit back..." indeed!
Only noticed one use of an odd (by American standards) slang term, but it was easily recognizable for what it was, so... |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: January 11, 2002 21:33 CST
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Oh man! That's a gooder! I just about burst out laughing in the end!!! *giggle* Ya know what you have to do now though? You have to write that journal for us girl! I wanna know what it says! *giggle* Great fic! I thouroughly enjoyed it! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2002 05:16 CST
Comment/Review:
mwahahahaha boy wouldn't we love to have that diary posted up HERE! hehe you are one helluva funny one :) that was an interesting look at one shots! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 10, 2002 04:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Your credibility is still intact. This was funny as hell because I can actually visualize the old fart trying to do "puff puffs" on Videl. Oh, and let us not forget Lunch sneezing and going psycho. I do wonder if Bulma forgot her book or left it there on purpose. Anyway, thanks for the laugh. I needed it. Peace |
