| "A Tale Of Tifa" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chehire Kit On: October 31, 2003 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, your fic wasn't all so bad, just, didn't fully spark my interest. It was highly unrealistic, and unrelated to the characters. Sure, Tifa/Sephiroth fics are quite fun, and not very common, but, the whole... he coming back to life to fulfill duties and what not. And then falling in love with Tifa, and vice versa. I just didn't much enjoy it. But, take what you can from that, and work on improving your writing, I'm sure you've got a lot of potential.
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Reviewed By: kt On: October 01, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK LOVED IT EXCEPT ITS NOT FINISHED AHHHH WTF I NEED YOU TO FINISH IT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Youko_Kurama On: June 13, 2003 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome. I give everything one it a ten. You should write more. I also must congragulate you on making Sephiroth a good guy. Cloud was a real punk in this fic though. Rejecting Tifa then running back to her. All in all good job. |
Reviewed By: miss d On: February 07, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOO!!!!!! TIFROTHS ROCK!!! UMM...BECAUSE THEY DO!!! so what, is tifa a cetra or something? if she is that'd be coolies, but even better if she's an angel, because angels rock *thinks of sephy-sama* :3 |
Reviewed By: ominae_yu_2003 On: January 30, 2003 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story please finish it!!! |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: November 02, 2002 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
make more please!* gives puppy dog face* |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 08:43 CST
Comment/Review:
fuck speed, hey wait do ya think thats what he's on?
p.s. if you have trouble with any ff games just email me, i've beaten 4,5,6,7,8,9 and 10 with everything , my adress is HYPERDEVIL666@aol.com, bye ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 08:37 CST
Comment/Review:
must kill lazy author, must kill lazy author
must make author take more than a single night to write chapters
must congratulate author for good fic
dark angel: shut up you stupid zombie!!!
zombie: okay |
Reviewed By: Ah-choo On: October 12, 2002 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this fic is very original. I rememeber reading about it in fanfiction.net. I hope you continue with the story. |
Reviewed By: EVIL Tifa On: October 07, 2002 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty. Finall a seph/tifa fan! |
Reviewed By: Trunks720 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR FANFIC!!! PLZ MAKE MORE!! |
Reviewed By: Trunks720 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 20:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
MAKE* oops... |
Reviewed By: Trunks720 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 20:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
COOL STORY!!! PLZ MACK MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seriously need some more work. Go back and edit it. And you shouldn't be flaming Speed, she/he gave you cunstructive critism. And you should be happy because he/she is right.
This isn't a flame it's called constructive critisem if you think it's a flame, go to www.dictionary.com and look it up. Work a little more on this fanfic.
Again...this needs work. I'm only speaking for myself. I see everyone else liked this...work. Again, fix your grammar and spelling. It gets annoying...
I guess it's good, but I've read better. |
Reviewed By: Ashley Little On: July 30, 2002 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it and i want more. You r a great writer and i hop you hurry and add on to this. Thank you for writing this.
Love ya Lots
Ashley |
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