Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 21:46 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice, and sweet. This couple is usually a bit cliche and repetitive, but yours is good. It's original. Bunny suits? lol. It's a really cool idea, and I like the way you put it together, but somehow, it felt like it didn't read quite smooth. It had something to do with the way you inserted the lyrics--but they were extremely appropriate, and I wouldn't change them. Well, I'm looking forward to seeing more of your stories. xp
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