"Stolen life" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kou Haruko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 00:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOOOVE this fic! I hope to heck you will finish this one day! It's so cool that you've placed chichi in the "saiyan slave" type of story esp since I LOOOVE kakarot!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 13:03 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: good story, its a shame you never got round to updating,
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Reviewed By: WARRIOR007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 03:24 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Finally someone writes an INCREDIBLY good Goku/Chichi fic this is th best fic ive ever read! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lelia On: September 16, 2005 04:45 CDT Comment/Review: I have fancied the idea myself, basicaly because I feel like ChiChi is always shadowed by Bulma ( But how can you not love B/V fics?). Still, you should be aware of the danger of copying the "Slave" fics by simply replacing Bulma with ChiChi. good luck with yur writing
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Reviewed By: la On: September 14, 2005 13:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: not bad, very interesting thou. the plaot has really caught my interest. please proceed.
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