Reviewed By: Gothic_Smurfette [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
a good start, i like how the dialogue is effectively and smoothly written. you may want to have someone beta your chapters before posting to catch the little things. i would need to read more of your story before helping you decide what to do, because at this point, it could go in a hundred directions. if you have a direction in mind, then go with that, and when you get stuck, you can ask then, too. Keep it coming, i'll watch for it!
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