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| "In All My Bitterness" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Good, but a little flawed.
Reviewed By: Thornis [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good work, i really like it. I really like all the fanfics i've read so far. There is one problem though...your grammar. A lot of run-on sentences that really spoil it for me. If you could fix that, it'd be great.
| Title: sissy i love it!!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your such a good writer! i'm jealous!! ^__^ you better keep it up! i love your fic and i love you! i'm always reading your fics, hope oyu know. you got any more pics to put up yet?? ^__^ ok i'll go, love you and tens are to low a rating for you! wish i could put infinities!
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