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| "As Time Goes By" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: .....
Reviewed By: ObsidianDeath On: December 15, 2007 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh... you do realise that jou's name is Katsuya right? his surname is jounouchi.. and no offense.. but John for a middle name? especially in a jap name? its a little wierd.. other than that it was pretty good. overall i liked it.
| Title: Potential
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 27, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I belive this story does have some potential but you havta continue writing it for me to get a feel for it and decide if I like it or not, it did catch and hold my intrest thou and I hope you write the next chapter! :) Your storys are some of the most decent i've come across, and its hard to find decent storys now en days bow that AFF has moved here and most of the good authers left ^^' Please continue to write and update!
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