| "I'm Looking In" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Title: Can't spell xp
Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever On: August 25, 2005 17:04 CDT
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gosh i'm illietrate ... *your ** I have faith that
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Title: Your the best!!!!!
Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever On: August 25, 2005 17:03 CDT
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tour story is making this inu-kun cry every time she reads it ......... i have that kagome and inuyasha will end up together in the end !!!!!
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Title: Mmm...
Reviewed By: PrincessLovely On: August 25, 2005 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MIND BLOWING SEX! Thats actually pretty realistic. The most intense arguments = the most intense sex. :P Its so rushed though because you are afraid the other one will change their mind. Anyway! Enough about my sexual experiences. >> Excellent chapter(s) as usual... oooh, I cant wait until the morning after chat! XD -Princess Lovely (formerly known as AimzyJ)
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Reviewed By: wench On: August 25, 2005 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... love the story! can't wait till they get back together which by the way, i hope is soon!!! LoL.
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Title: great chapters
Reviewed By: dogdemonandkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 4 and 5 are very well done, can't wait to see what happens, can't wait for the next chapter to see what was writen in the e-mail.
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Reviewed By: Lil_Kag [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 11:29 CDT
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What the hell is in that dam e-mail?? I'm dying here, I need to know! *fist my hands in my hair and scream* I need to know! Question! If InuYasha got Kagome's e-mail 6 months before she came home, didn't she notice anything different about him when they talked after that time?? Or they didn't talk at all after? Sorry if i'm being ignorant. Just to know.
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG you gotta keep updating i was almost in tear in the chapppie when Kag found out but who sent the email... Ayame? dare i say Kikyou? Anyways only you know so Update soon.
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Title: Glass Thorn
Reviewed By: glass thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 10:11 CDT
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your writing kagome beautifully, my boyfriend of 3 years recently dumped me so he could be single again, and i know how it feels to still want to see him and touch him like i used to but can't anymore. i think that your decription oh how kagome feels is perfect. keep writing i liked your first story but i think i'll like this one more.
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far i love this story!!! it's pulling the heart strings. made me want to cry. i hate to see inu and kag hurting. so please post the next chapter soon i must know whats going on with the whole e-mail thing and has inu had sex with ayame or are they just dateing?
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: Rachiru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much. I was waiting for a little while for the sequel. I love how you write...I actually got angry and sad when I found out Inuyasha was with someone else . Oh keep writing . I have to say you are one of my favorite authors.
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYYYYY! I love it keep writing gurl.
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Title: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: Crimson Warrior On: August 24, 2005 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So you did have them break up but someone else did that, are you going to say who it was or have a mysterious figur say that? update and tell in the end of your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: rdsjr_1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, i liked both stories so far and i cant wait for you to update......i really appreciate the good read
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Title: Suggestion
Reviewed By: Drysdale On: August 24, 2005 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that "I'm looking in" are lyrics from outside being that im a staind fan myself, and i was reading the chapters and i instantly started to think of the lyrics to the new single from staind "Right Here" and i thought that song would go great wioth this story. I know you may not use my idea but i just thought it would be cool to see that song used.
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Title: I fought tears...
Reviewed By: KitCatKit On: August 24, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read your first part of this story, it was creative and longed my to read more. Now, that all this has happened to Kagome, I fought the cold tears back. I barely cry, only at times when I have a right to cry. This was one of those. Please keep reveiwing! .-. Now... Later!
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